Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use correct singular/plural forms, correct tense and grammar, and give one clear reason plus a brief example. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add a specific supporting detail using a linking word.

예시: I prefer happy music because it helps me relieve stress and improves my mood. For example, when I listen to upbeat songs after a long day at work, I feel more relaxed and energetic.

제안: Answer directly, correct subject-verb agreement and pronoun use, and organize supporting details with linking words. Offer one specific reason and one brief example instead of vague phrases.

예시: Yes, it does. Happy music usually makes me excited because of its fast tempo and positive lyrics. For instance, upbeat pop songs remind me of fun times with friends, which lifts my energy immediately.

제안: Correct past tense and vocabulary, and be specific about the class. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add a concise reason and a brief detail about what you learned.

예시: Yes, when I was a child I took guitar lessons because I was a fan of a Thai guitarist. During the classes I learned basic chords and practiced simple songs, which helped me improve my playing.

제안: Use correct noun forms and tense, avoid filler words, and give one clear reason plus a short example. Begin with a direct statement, then add a specific supporting detail with a linking word.

예시: Yes, I often listen to music while driving because it helps me concentrate and prevents boredom. For example, I usually play podcasts or energetic playlists on long drives to stay alert.

× I prefer happy musics because it helped me to read my stress and feel good.

✓ I prefer happy music because it helps me to reduce my stress and feel good.

'Music' is an uncountable noun and should not take the plural 'musics'. 'Helped' is past tense but the context is a general preference, so present simple 'helps' is correct. 'Read my stress' is incorrect collocation; 'reduce my stress' or 'relieve my stress' is appropriate. Suggestion: Use uncountable form 'music' and present simple for general truths: 'I prefer happy music because it helps me reduce my stress and feel good.'

× Yes it does. Happy musics make me feels excited.

✓ Yes, it does. Happy music makes me feel excited.

'Musics' is incorrect plural for the uncountable noun 'music' (singular/plural issue), and the verb must agree with third person singular subject: 'music makes' not 'make'. Also after 'make' we use the bare infinitive 'feel', not 'feels'. Suggestion: Use 'music makes me feel excited.'

× This is because most of them often share about a good feeling, good emotions and good memory.

✓ This is because most of them often express good feelings, positive emotions, and pleasant memories.

The phrase 'share about' is incorrect; verbs like 'express' or 'convey' are used with 'feelings' and 'emotions'. 'Good memory' should be plural or rephrased as 'pleasant memories'. Also parallel structure requires plural nouns: 'good feelings, good emotions, and good memories.' Suggestion: Use verbs properly with nouns: 'express good feelings, positive emotions, and pleasant memories.'

× So when I recently I feel excited.

✓ So recently I have felt excited.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and tense. 'So when I recently I feel excited' is ungrammatical. If referring to recent experiences, present perfect 'have felt' or simple past 'felt' is appropriate. 'Recently I have felt excited' or 'So recently I felt excited.' Suggestion: Use correct word order and appropriate tense: 'Recently I have felt excited.'

× When I was a child, I take some practice kita cards.

✓ When I was a child, I took some practice guitar classes.

The context is past time ('When I was a child'), so past tense 'took' is required rather than present 'take'. Also 'practice kita cards' is unclear; likely intended 'practice guitar classes' or 'guitar lessons.' Suggestion: Use past tense and correct vocabulary: 'I took guitar lessons.'

× This is because I keen to practice guitar because of I am a fans of guitarist of Thailand.

✓ This is because I was keen to practice the guitar since I am a fan of a Thai guitarist.

'Keen to' requires appropriate tense—if referring to past interest, 'was keen to' or keep present 'am keen to'. 'Because of I am' is ungrammatical; use 'since' or 'because' plus clause. 'a fans' should be 'a fan' (singular). 'guitarist of Thailand' is unnatural; 'a Thai guitarist' or 'a guitarist from Thailand' is correct. Also include article before 'guitar.' Suggestion: Fix prepositions and articles and match tense: 'I was keen to practice the guitar since I am a fan of a Thai guitarist.'

× So that's why I took this class.

✓ So that's why I took those classes.

Original is mostly acceptable, but earlier we corrected to 'guitar lessons' (plural) so 'class' should agree. If multiple lessons, use 'classes' or 'lessons.' Suggestion: Ensure consistency: 'So that's why I took those lessons.'

× Yes, I often listen to musics while driving because it's helped me to focus when I drive and uh, avoid the boring feeling.

✓ Yes, I often listen to music while driving because it helps me focus when I drive and avoid feeling bored.

'Musics' is incorrect; use uncountable 'music'. 'It's helped' mixes contraction with past participle but context is habitual, so present simple 'helps' is correct. 'Avoid the boring feeling' is awkward; use 'avoid feeling bored' or 'avoid boredom.' Suggestion: Use uncountable 'music' and present simple for habitual actions: 'it helps me focus... and avoid feeling bored.'