Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然、语法更准确，并给出具体原因与例子。避免重复词（如“can really can”）。可以用一句主题句然后用一两句具体说明为什么悲伤音乐对你有效，例如描述情绪变化或举例说明场景。

예시: I prefer sad music because it helps me process my emotions and relieve stress. For example, after a long day at school I listen to mellow ballads which help me calm down and think things through.

제안: 回答要更连贯并使用更恰当的词汇。把观点和例子用连接词衔接，避免模糊表述（如“provide many passion”）。可以具体说明哪类快乐歌曲让你兴奋以及场合。

예시: Yes, happy music often energises me, especially upbeat pop songs with fast rhythms. For instance, I enjoy listening to lively Mandarin pop at parties because the tempo and catchy chorus make me want to dance.

제안: 语法错误较多，应使用正确的时态和动词形式，并完整表达理由。避免重复单词（如“join join”）和不完整句子。可以先直接回答，然后说明原因并补充细节（例如没上过的原因或是否自学）。

예시: No, I haven't joined any music classes because I never had time while studying. Instead, I try to learn songs online and practice singing at home occasionally.

제안: 回答需更流畅、句子完整，并用合适的时态和连词。避免口吃和重复。可以先给出简短肯定，然后用一两句说明什么时候听、听什么类型的音乐及原因。

예시: Yes, I often listen to music while doing daily routines. For example, I play soft pop songs while brushing my teeth and getting ready in the morning because it helps me wake up and improves my mood.

× I think I prefer to listen sad music 'cause I think sad music can really can release my stress and make me.

✓ I think I prefer listening to sad music because I think sad music can really release my stress and comfort me.

错误类型：动词 + -ing（及短语搭配）。 解释：在英语中，动词prefer后常跟动名词（prefer doing）或不定式（prefer to do），但短语“prefer to listen sad music”缺少介词“to”后的宾语结构正确形式为“listening to sad music”或“to listen to sad music”。另外，句中有重复的情态动词“can can”，应删除一个；“make me”不完整，需接表语如“comfortable”或用“comfort me”。建议：使用“prefer listening to”或“prefer to listen to”，删除重复的“can”，并补全“make me”后面的内容。

× Yes, I think happy music can make me excited. For example, there are many happy songs in China and we love them. They can provide many passion.

✓ Yes, I think happy music can make me feel excited. For example, there are many happy songs in China and we love them. They can bring a lot of passion.

错误类型：形容词或副词使用不当。 解释：“make me excited”可以但更常用的是“make me feel excited”，使表达更自然；“provide many passion”搭配不当，名词“passion”不可数，且动词“provide”与“passion”搭配不自然，应该用“bring”或“give”并用“a lot of passion”或“passion”作为不可数名词。建议：用“make me feel excited”并将“provide many passion”改为“bring a lot of passion”或“give us passion”。

× No, I haven't join join a music classes. I think my. My thing is very bad.

✓ No, I haven't joined any music classes. I think my singing is very bad.

错误类型：过去时使用不当。 解释：现在完成时（I haven't ...）后需使用过去分词，因此“join”应改为过去分词“joined”。“a music classes”中同时出现不定冠词和复数名词，应改为“any music classes”。句子“my. My thing is very bad.”不完整且不清楚，应具体说明“singing”（唱歌）或其他技能。建议：用“I haven't joined any music classes.”并把“my thing”替换为具体名词，如“my singing”。

× Yes, absolutely. When I wake up in the morning, I prefer to play some music when I. What washed my teeth and clean my cleaned my face?

✓ Yes, absolutely. When I wake up in the morning, I prefer to play some music while I wash my teeth and clean my face.

错误类型：动词 + -ing（及连词结构）。 解释：句中“prefer to play some music when I.”为不完整结构，且随后出现混乱的时态和重复（washed/cleaned）。描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时（I wash, I clean）或使用进行时（while I'm washing）。“while”常用于两个同时进行的动作，且动词应为基础形式或现在进行式一致。建议：合并为“prefer to play some music while I wash my teeth and clean my face”。