Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and concise supporting detail. Say whether you generally prefer one type and explain with one specific reason or example. Use linking words (e.g., "but", "because"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and fix verb forms and word choice.

예시: I usually prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me concentrate. However, sometimes I choose sad songs when I want to reflect or feel comforted, for example after a long day.

제안: Answer directly about excitement, use correct tense and clearer contrast. State whether it makes you excited, then give a concise reason or example. Use linking words like "but" or "and" to connect ideas, and avoid contradictory words ("peaceful" vs "excited") unless explaining both effects.

예시: Yes, happy music often makes me feel more energetic and excited because of the fast rhythm and bright melody. At the same time, gentle happy songs can make me feel calm and peaceful when I want to relax.

제안: Give a direct short answer then add a specific plan with correct grammar. Use one or two supporting details about what class you want and why. Correct verb forms ("taken" -> "take") and phrasing ("type" -> "try" or "learn").

예시: No, I haven't taken any music classes yet, but I plan to take piano lessons next year because I want to learn basic music theory and improve my playing skills. I think practical lessons will help me practice regularly.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence about how often you listen while doing activities, then give a specific example and explain why. Use correct collocations ("take a shower" is fine, but "bath music" is unclear — say "relaxing music"). Keep it concise and coherent with linking words.

예시: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things, especially when I take a shower. I prefer relaxing or ambient music because it helps me feel refreshed and relaxed before I start my day.

× When I happy, I prefer happy music sometime, but sometime when I said I prefer sad music.

✓ When I am happy, I prefer happy music sometimes, but sometimes I say I prefer sad music.

Missing verb 'am' for state (to be) and wrong tense/form for 'sometime(s)' and 'said'. Use 'am' for present state (There be issue/Present tense). Use 'sometimes' (adverb) and present simple 'say' to match habitual preference. Suggestion: include the verb 'am' after 'I' and use 'sometimes' and present simple for habitual actions.

× Happy music made me feel peaceful at least I prefer listen to happy music when I feel happy.

✓ Happy music makes me feel peaceful; at least I prefer to listen to happy music when I feel happy.

Subject 'Happy music' is singular and requires present simple 'makes' for habitual or general effects, not past 'made'. Also after 'prefer' use the infinitive 'to listen' or the gerund 'listening'; 'prefer to listen' fits here. Suggestion: use present simple for general truths and include 'to' before 'listen'.

× Not really, but in the future I will taken any music class because I want to learn, I want to type something new.

✓ Not really, but in the future I will take a music class because I want to learn; I want to try something new.

After modal 'will' use base verb 'take', not past participle 'taken'. Also 'any music class' is odd—use 'a music class' for one unspecified class. 'Type' is wrong word; 'try' fits context. Suggestion: use 'will' + base verb and choose correct determiners and vocabulary.

× I usually like listen to music when I take a shower, especially bath music.

✓ I usually like listening to music when I take a shower, especially bath music.

After 'like' when speaking about general preferences, use gerund 'listening' or 'to listen'. Here 'listening' is natural. Suggestion: use 'like listening to' or 'like to listen to'.

× It makes me feel refreshing and relaxed.

✓ It makes me feel refreshed and relaxed.

'Refreshing' describes something that causes refreshment; the correct adjective for how a person feels is 'refreshed' (past participle used as adjective). Use 'refreshed and relaxed' to describe the listener's state. Suggestion: use 'refreshed' to describe personal feeling.