Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details and use linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (e.g., "it's depend", "I use used to").

예시: It depends on my mood. If I'm in a good mood, I usually listen to upbeat, happy songs because they make me feel energized. However, when I'm feeling down, I prefer sad music because it helps me process my emotions.

제안: Answer directly and then explain briefly with clear linking words. Correct grammar (use subjects and verbs properly) and give a specific example of how happy music affects you. Avoid unclear phrases like "good goodbye music".

예시: Yes, happy music does make me feel more excited. For example, listening to upbeat pop songs before a workout boosts my energy and motivation, and that positive mood often improves the rest of my day.

제안: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer and provide a reason or brief explanation. Use linking words for clarity and avoid repeating the same idea. Use correct verb forms (e.g., "I don't sing", "I only listen to music").

예시: No, I haven't taken any music classes because I don't enjoy singing or performing. I prefer listening to music in my free time rather than learning to sing.

제안: Respond directly, then give a specific example of an activity and how music helps you. Correct sentence structure and verb forms, and avoid irrelevant or repeated comments (avoid repeating "became"). If mentioning a dream, link it briefly to the main answer.

예시: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other activities. For instance, I like to listen to songs while playing cricket because it helps me concentrate and relax. I also dream of becoming a cricketer, so music sometimes motivates me during practice.

× It's depend on my mood.

✓ It depends on my mood.

Subject-verb agreement requires the third person singular 'it' to take the verb form 'depends' in the present simple. Change 'depend' to 'depends' to match the subject 'It'. Suggestion: Use 'it depends' when describing how something varies with mood.

× If I have a good mood and happy face I I use used to listen happy song.

✓ If I'm in a good mood and feeling happy, I usually listen to happy songs.

Multiple issues: incorrect tense/wording 'use used to' and missing prepositions/articles. 'Usually' expresses habitual action; 'listen to' requires the preposition 'to'; 'songs' should be plural. Also 'I'm in a good mood' and 'feeling happy' are natural expressions. Suggestion: Use 'usually listen to happy songs' for habitual listening.

× If I have sad sad sad mood I try to listen sad music.

✓ If I'm in a very sad mood, I try to listen to sad music.

Use 'I'm in a sad mood' or 'in a very sad mood' (present state) and include the preposition 'to' after 'listen'. 'Sad sad sad' is colloquial repetition; replace with 'very sad'. Suggestion: Say 'listen to sad music' and use 'very' for emphasis.

× Yes the happy music make feel more excited if you listen good goodbye music you feel positive and it's effect on your life.

✓ Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited. If you listen to uplifting music, you feel positive and it affects your life.

Subject-verb agreement: 'music' (singular as a general concept) takes 'makes' not 'make'. 'Make feel' lacks an object; use 'makes me feel'. 'Listen' needs the preposition 'to'. 'Good goodbye music' is unclear; 'uplifting' or 'happy' is better. Use 'affects' (verb) rather than 'it's effect'. Suggestion: Use clear nouns and correct verb forms: 'music makes me feel', 'listen to', 'it affects'.

× No, I'm not taking music classes.

✓ No, I'm not taking music classes.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable if meaning is 'I am not currently enrolled in music classes'. Keep as is. Suggestion: If intended meaning is 'I have never taken', use 'No, I haven't taken any music classes.'

× I don't want to be sing singing.

✓ I don't want to sing.

After 'want to' use the base form of the verb ('sing'), not 'be sing' or 'singing'. Remove unnecessary auxiliary 'be'. Suggestion: Use 'want to' + base verb: 'I don't want to sing'.

× I don't sing a song.

✓ I don't sing songs.

In general habitual statements use plural 'songs' or no object: 'I don't sing' or 'I don't sing songs'. 'A song' suggests a single instance; for general habit use plural. Suggestion: Use 'I don't sing' or 'I don't sing songs' for general habits.

× I'm only listening song.

✓ I only listen to songs.

Habitual action requires simple present 'listen'. Use 'listen to' with the preposition 'to' and plural 'songs' for general statements. Suggestion: Say 'I only listen to music' or 'I only listen to songs'.

× I want to be listen.

✓ I want to listen.

After 'want to' use the base verb 'listen' not 'be listen'. Remove 'be'. Suggestion: Use 'I want to listen' or 'I want to listen to music'.

× I don't prefer to sing a music.

✓ I don't prefer to sing music.

Do not use the article 'a' before uncountable noun 'music'. Also 'prefer' is followed by the infinitive without 'to' when used in this context: 'prefer to sing' is acceptable but 'sing music' better as 'sing' generally. However 'I prefer not to sing' is another natural option. Suggestion: Say 'I prefer not to sing' or 'I don't prefer to sing'.

× I only want to be listen music.

✓ I only want to listen to music.

Use 'want to' + base verb 'listen' and include preposition 'to' before 'music'. Remove unnecessary 'be'. Suggestion: 'I only want to listen to music'.

× Yes, sometimes when you listen music while doing other thing.

✓ Yes, sometimes I listen to music while doing other things.

The student should use the first person 'I' rather than 'you' when describing personal habits. Use 'listen to' and plural 'things'. Suggestion: Keep pronouns consistent with the speaker: 'I listen to music while doing other things'.

× I like it to play cricket in my free time and also I have a dream to become became a became a cricketer.

✓ I like to play cricket in my free time and I have a dream of becoming a cricketer.

Use the infinitive 'to play' after 'like'. For future aspiration use 'have a dream of becoming' (gerund after 'of') or 'I want to become a cricketer'. 'Became a became a' is incorrect repetition and wrong tense. Suggestion: Say 'I like to play cricket in my free time' and 'I have a dream of becoming a cricketer' or 'I want to become a cricketer'.