Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa (contoh: verb forms dan artikula), buat jawaban lebih ringkas dan gunakan satu atau dua alasan spesifik. Gunakan kalimat topik yang jelas, lalu dukung dengan detail singkat. Contoh perbaikan: ubah "when I listening" menjadi "when I listen" dan hindari pengulangan kata "happy".

예시: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood. For example, upbeat songs with lively rhythms make me feel energetic and help me focus on positive thoughts.

제안: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan pilih kata penghubung yang tepat. Hindari frasa yang tidak jelas seperti "leave my mood"; jelaskan bagaimana musik mempengaruhi perasaan Anda. Jaga jawaban dalam maksimal 3–4 kalimat.

예시: Yes, happy music often makes me feel more excited because its fast tempo and positive lyrics boost my energy. For example, I feel more motivated to exercise or start tasks after listening to upbeat tracks.

제안: Perbaiki penggunaan tense dan preposisi, serta buat alasan lebih spesifik. Ganti frasa canggung seperti "learning of a music" dengan "learning music" atau "taking lessons". Tambahkan singkat alasan mengapa Anda tidak belajar musik.

예시: No, I haven't taken any music classes because I mainly enjoy listening to music rather than learning to play instruments. I prefer to explore different genres on my own in my free time.

제안: Perbaiki repetisi dan tata bahasa (mis. "I always listening" → "I always listen"). Buat jawaban lebih terstruktur: beri pernyataan umum lalu contoh konkret kapan dan mengapa Anda melakukannya. Hindari mengulang frasa yang sama.

예시: Definitely. I often listen to my playlist while doing homework because it helps me relax and concentrate. For instance, mellow instrumental tracks keep me calm during long study sessions.

× I prefer happy music because when I listening to happy music my mood is happy and I enjoy my life and if I listening a sad song.

✓ I prefer happy music because when I listen to happy music my mood improves and I enjoy my life; but if I listen to a sad song, I do not feel the same.

The original sentence uses incorrect verb forms 'listening' where simple present 'listen' is required for habitual actions. Use 'listen' with subjects I/you/we/they for present tense. Also improve cohesion by splitting clauses and using appropriate conjunctions. Suggestion: Use simple present 'listen' for regular habits and link ideas clearly with conjunctions like 'but' or 'however'.

× Yeah, of course, because cheerful songs can leave my mood so I can enjoyable doing my day.

✓ Yeah, of course, because cheerful songs can lift my mood so I can enjoy my day.

Errors: 'leave my mood' is incorrect collocation — use 'lift my mood'. 'Enjoyable' is an adjective and cannot follow 'can' as a verb; use base verb 'enjoy'. Correct structure: modal 'can' + base verb. Suggestion: Use correct verb phrases (lift my mood) and modal verb + base verb (can enjoy).

× No, because I just liked listening music and not learning of a music.

✓ No, because I just like listening to music and not learning music.

Mixed tenses and incorrect gerund use: 'liked' (past) should be present 'like' to match current preference. Use 'listening to music' with preposition 'to'. 'Learning of a music' is ungrammatical; use 'learning music' or 'learning about music'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent (present simple) and use 'listening to' plus 'learning music'.

× Definitely like when I'm doing my homework I always listening my playlist to make it more relaxing and enjoy when I'm doing my homework.

✓ Definitely. When I'm doing my homework, I always listen to my playlist to make it more relaxing and to enjoy doing my work.

Use simple present 'listen' or present continuous 'I'm listening' correctly; 'I always listening' is wrong. Include preposition 'to' after 'listen'. Repetition of 'when I'm doing my homework' is redundant; streamline sentence. Use infinitive 'to enjoy' for parallel structure. Suggestion: Use 'I always listen to' and parallel 'to make' and 'to enjoy' structure.