Teachers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence stating whether you have a favorite teacher, then add one or two specific reasons or a short memory. Use correct grammar (e.g., "many teachers," "no one says"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I do have a favorite teacher. She was my high school English teacher because she encouraged me to read widely and gave helpful feedback that improved my writing.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one concise reason with correct grammar. Use linking words (for example, "because" or "however") and finish the thought. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like "I don't the people."

예시: No, I don't want to be a teacher. Although I can explain things to my nephew, I don't feel confident managing a whole classroom because I prefer one-to-one interaction.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the teacher, then give two specific supporting details (what he taught and how he helped). Use correct tense and linking words (e.g., "who," "because," "so"). Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I remember a teacher named Cornelio who taught me biochemistry. He made difficult topics clear by using simple examples and regular reviews, so I understood the subject much better.

제안: Answer directly (yes/no) then provide one specific detail about a teacher you remember. Use correct grammar and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words like "however" or "but" to show contrast if needed.

예시: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers. I do remember one primary teacher who lived near my father's house, but I haven't seen or contacted her for many years.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating how the teacher helped you, then give one or two specific ways (methods, habits, results). Use correct verb forms and avoid filler sounds like "MMM." Link reasons with words like "by" or "so" and keep it concise.

예시: My favourite teacher helped me improve by making me focus on study habits and explaining chemistry step by step. As a result, I became more confident and my grades improved.

× I remember a lot of teacher during my life but anyone say is my favorite or something like that.

✓ I remember a lot of teachers during my life but none of them I would call my favorite.

The sentence has quantifier and plural issues: 'a lot of teacher' should be 'a lot of teachers' (plural). 'Anyone say is my favorite' is incorrect — 'anyone' is wrong as a quantifier here; 'none of them' correctly expresses that no teachers are favorites. Also word order and verb 'say' are incorrect; use 'I would call' to express opinion. Improve by using correct plural forms and appropriate quantifiers and clearer verb phrases.

× No, I wouldn't like to be a teacher in the future because I think I don't the people who can teach other people.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to be a teacher in the future because I don't think I am the kind of person who can teach others.

Errors include missing verb 'think' object placement and incorrect phrase 'the people who can teach other people'. Use modal 'would' correctly for preference. Correct structure is 'I don't think I am...' Also 'others' is more natural than 'other people'. Suggest practicing sentence structure 'I don't think I am the kind of person who...'.

× Sometimes I can explain my nephew or my boyfriend a lot of things, but I don't think so in a classroom with a lot of.

✓ Sometimes I can explain many things to my nephew or my boyfriend, but I don't think I could do that in a classroom full of students.

Problems: incorrect word order 'explain my nephew or my boyfriend a lot of things' — English requires 'explain ... to ...' Also 'a lot of' is incomplete without a noun. 'I don't think so in a classroom with a lot of' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't think I could do that in a classroom full of students.' Practice using 'explain X to Y' and completing noun phrases after quantifiers.

× Yes, I have a teacher I remember his name is Cornelio and he teach me biochemistry and I remember him because the subject in the school was really difficult and he teach me really good about biochemistry.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher I remember; his name is Cornelio and he taught me biochemistry. I remember him because the subject at school was really difficult and he taught me biochemistry very well.

Errors: tense consistency — present perfect 'I have a teacher I remember' is awkward; more importantly 'he teach me' should be past tense 'he taught me' (Past tense issue). Also 'teach me really good' is incorrect: use past participle/adverb 'taught me very well'. 'The subject in the school' should be 'the subject at school.' Improve by keeping past tense when describing past events and using adverbs ('well') rather than adjectives ('good').

× I know I don't have any contact with any school teachers.

✓ No, I don't have any contact with my former school teachers.

Using 'I know' at the start is unnecessary and awkward; pronoun/possessive use is better as 'my former school teachers' to specify which teachers. Also double 'any' is acceptable but redundant. Suggest using 'my former school teachers' to be clearer.

× I remember 1 teacher about UH primary. She teach me in primary.

✓ I remember one teacher from UH primary. She taught me in primary school.

'Teach' should be in past tense 'taught' because the action happened in the past (Past tense issue). Also use 'one' instead of '1' in formal writing and 'from UH primary' is more natural. Add 'school' after 'primary.'

× I remember she lived close my father's home but I don't know what happened with her a lot.

✓ I remember she lived close to my father's home but I don't know what happened to her since then.

Preposition errors: 'lived close my father's home' needs 'close to'. 'Happened with her a lot' is incorrect; use 'happened to her' and 'since then' to indicate uncertainty about events after that time. Suggest learning common verb-preposition combinations like 'happen to' and 'live close to.'

× MMM my favorite teacher help me improve improve every day because I need to put attention and focus and learn all about your chemistry and was really hard for me.

✓ My favorite teacher helped me improve every day because I needed to pay attention and focus to learn all about organic chemistry, which was really hard for me.

Multiple errors: verb agreement 'help me' should be past tense 'helped me' if referring to past events (Third person singular / Past tense issue). Repetition 'improve improve' removed. 'I need to put attention' is incorrect — use 'I needed to pay attention'. 'learn all about your chemistry' is wrong pronoun and field; likely 'organic chemistry' or 'chemistry' and use 'which was really hard for me' to combine clauses. Suggest using correct tense consistency and collocations like 'pay attention' and specify the subject correctly.