Teachers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (teacher's qualities and a concrete memory). Use correct articles and verb forms and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes. My favorite teacher was my secondary school art and design teacher. She was very kind and once told me I had real talent for drawing, which boosted my confidence and encouraged me to enter a school art contest.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and a concise reason. Correct grammar (introvert → introverted; 'prefer not to' etc.). Use one linking phrase to add an example or consequence.

예시: No, I don't want to be a teacher. I am quite introverted and uncomfortable speaking in front of groups, so I would find classroom teaching stressful; for example, I get nervous giving presentations.

제안: Clarify the meaning and correct grammar. Start with a clear statement: whether you remember teachers and what you remember about them. Avoid vague fragments and give one specific detail about their impact.

예시: Yes, I remember several teachers from my past, even if I can't recall all their names because my memory isn't good. I am grateful to them for their support, especially one math teacher who helped me improve my confidence.

제안: Make your response direct and grammatically correct. Use a topic sentence and briefly explain why you lost contact, with one linking word to add detail or feeling.

예시: No, unfortunately I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers. I changed my phone number and lost my contacts, so I haven't been able to reconnect, although I would like to.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear, specific example. Use correct verbs and nouns (encouraged me to enter the art contest; I won a prize). Add a brief result or feeling to show impact.

예시: She encouraged me to enter an art and design contest, and I won a prize. That recognition boosted my confidence and made me appreciate her encouragement.

× When I was in secondary school I took a art and design class and I don't remember her name but she is really kind and she told me I'm very talented at art so I really like her.

✓ When I was in secondary school I took an art and design class and I don't remember her name but she was really kind and she told me I was very talented at art so I really liked her.

Errors: wrong article 'a art' should be 'an art' or better 'an art and design class' but standard is 'an art and design class' because 'art' begins with a vowel sound; also tense consistency: referring to past teacher should use past tense 'was' and 'told' followed by 'I was' and 'liked' to match past time frame. Suggestion: use 'an art and design class' and keep past tense for actions and states related to that period. Note: chosen correction uses 'an art and design class' corrected to 'an art and design class' but for smoother English 'an art and design class' or 'an art and design course'.

× No, I don't want to be a teacher in my future because I'm a very introvert person so I can't speak well in front of others.

✓ No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I'm a very introverted person so I can't speak well in front of others.

Errors: 'in my future' is unnatural; use 'in the future'. 'introvert' used as a noun is acceptable but 'introverted' is the correct adjective form modifying 'person'. Suggestion: use 'in the future' and 'introverted person'.

× I'm I'm very shy person so I'm not prefer doing a presentation in front of.

✓ I'm a very shy person so I don't prefer giving presentations in front of others.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'very shy person'; 'not prefer' is incorrect—use 'don't prefer' or better 'I prefer not to give presentations'; 'doing a presentation in front of' is incomplete—add object 'others' and use 'giving presentations' or 'giving a presentation'. Suggestion: add article, use correct auxiliary 'do', and complete the phrase with 'others'.

× Yes, I remember all the teacher who too I thought who I teach, but I don't really remember that their name because my bad memory issue.

✓ Yes, I remember all the teachers who taught me, but I don't really remember their names because I have a bad memory.

Errors: plural/singular mismatch: 'all the teacher' should be 'all the teachers'; incorrect relative clause 'who too I thought who I teach' is garbled—intended meaning 'who taught me'; 'their name' should be 'their names' for plural antecedent; 'my bad memory issue' is unidiomatic—use 'I have a bad memory' or 'my memory is bad'. Suggestion: use plural nouns consistently, correct past tense 'taught', and natural expression for poor memory.

× But I always thankful. I always live thankful to them because they are.

✓ But I am always thankful. I am always grateful to them because they helped me.

Errors: missing verb 'am' in 'I always thankful'; 'live thankful' is incorrect—use 'am always grateful' or 'I always feel thankful'; 'because they are' is incomplete—specify reason, e.g., 'because they helped me'. Suggestion: include the verb 'am', use 'grateful' or 'thankful', and complete the clause explaining why.

× No I unfortunately I did. I can't connect to my primary school teacher because I changed my phone number so all my contacts are gone.

✓ No, unfortunately I didn't. I can't contact my primary school teachers because I changed my phone number and all my contacts are gone.

Errors: contradictory and incorrect auxiliary 'I unfortunately I did' should be 'I didn't' if answering 'Are you still in touch?' Also 'connect to' is less natural than 'contact'; 'teacher' should be plural if referring to multiple teachers; run-on sentence needs conjunction 'and'. Suggestion: use a clear negative 'No, unfortunately I haven't' or 'No, unfortunately I didn't', use 'contact', pluralize if needed, and join clauses correctly.

× So I wanted to to contact with them but I could not.

✓ So I wanted to contact them but I could not.

Errors: duplicate 'to to'; 'contact with' is incorrect collocation—use 'contact them' without 'with'. Suggestion: remove duplicate word and use correct verb-object structure 'contact them'.

× Uh, one of my favorite teacher encouraged me to sign in the con design and art contents and I got a prize.

✓ Uh, one of my favorite teachers encouraged me to sign up for the design and art contest and I got a prize.

Errors: singular/plural 'teacher' should be 'teachers' if 'one of'; 'sign in' is wrong here—use 'sign up for' or 'enter'; 'con design and art contents' appears to be garbled—likely 'design and art contest'; 'contents' wrong word. Suggestion: use 'one of my favorite teachers', 'sign up for' and 'contest', and ensure correct noun choice.

× So I'm really thankful to her and I really appreciate to her.

✓ So I'm really thankful to her and I really appreciate her.

Errors: 'appreciate to her' is incorrect—'appreciate' is transitive and takes a direct object without 'to'. Suggestion: use 'appreciate her' or 'I really appreciate what she did'.