Teachers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and correct sentence structure and word choice (e.g., 'my primary school English teacher').

예시: Yes. My favorite teacher was my primary school English teacher. She explained things patiently and often encouraged us to read aloud, which boosted my confidence. Because her lessons were fun and supportive, I decided I wanted to become a language teacher.

제안: Clarify awkward phrases and use natural collocations. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then support with specific reasons and a linking word. Replace unnatural words ('by perfection', 'brew their confidence') with appropriate verbs and nouns.

예시: Yes, definitely. I am already working as an English teacher, and I find it very rewarding because I can help students improve their speaking and listening skills. It also requires a lot of patience, so I can support learners when they make mistakes and help them gradually build confidence.

제안: This answer is mostly clear and relevant but improve tense consistency and add a brief linking phrase to show why you remember her. Keep it concise and correct minor grammar (use past tense where appropriate).

예시: Yes. I remember a primary school English teacher who treated me kindly and explained everything patiently, so I felt cared for. Her kindness and clear explanations boosted my confidence in learning English, which is why I still remember her.

제안: Good content and coherence. Improve grammar (article use and verb forms) and add a brief linking word to connect ideas. Keep it short and natural.

예시: No, I don't have their contact details, which is a pity. Social media wasn't very popular when I was at primary school, so we didn't stay in touch after I left.

제안: Clarify and correct unclear phrases and grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give two specific examples of how the teacher helped, using linking words. Replace vague or incorrect words ('smarter', 'patient praise') with accurate expressions.

예시: She helped me a lot when I was shy. For example, she encouraged me to speak in class and gave me extra practice after lessons, which helped me gradually build confidence. Her warm praise also made me more willing to participate.

× Favorite teacher yes, my favorite teacher was my primary school, English leisure she explains things patiently and often encourage us to read aloud, which boosts my confidence.

✓ Yes. My favorite teacher was my primary school English teacher; she explained things patiently and often encouraged us to read aloud, which boosted my confidence.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: missing subjects and verbs, run-on clauses, incorrect verb tenses and missing nouns. I split the ideas into clear sentences, added the missing noun 'teacher', corrected verb tenses ('explains' to 'explained' and 'encourage' to 'encouraged') to match the past context, and changed 'boosts' to 'boosted' to keep past-time consistency. Suggestion: divide complex ideas into shorter sentences, ensure each clause has a subject and appropriate verb form, and keep verb tenses consistent.

× Because of her supportive teaching style and the way she made lessons enjoyable, I decided I wanted to become a language teacher my.

✓ Because of her supportive teaching style and the way she made lessons enjoyable, I decided I wanted to become a language teacher.

The phrase ends with an extra word 'my' that makes the sentence ungrammatical. Removing 'my' restores correct sentence structure. Suggestion: proofread for stray words at the end of sentences.

× Yes, definitely. I'm already an English teacher by perfection and I find this work very rewarding because I can help students improve their communication skills.

✓ Yes, definitely. I'm already an English teacher by profession and I find this work very rewarding because I can help students improve their communication skills.

The word 'perfection' is incorrect here; the intended noun is 'profession'. This is a vocabulary/word choice error affecting correctness. Suggestion: use 'profession' when referring to one's occupation.

× It also requires a lot of patience, so I can support learners when they make mistakes and gradually brew their confidence.

✓ It also requires a lot of patience, so I can support learners when they make mistakes and gradually build their confidence.

The verb 'brew' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'build' (meaning to increase or develop). This is a wrong verb choice. Suggestion: choose verbs that collocate with 'confidence' such as 'build' or 'boost'.

× Yes, in primary school I had a favorite English teacher who treated me like a daughter and explained everything patiently. Her kindness and clear explanations really boost my confidence in learning English.

✓ Yes, in primary school I had a favorite English teacher who treated me like a daughter and explained everything patiently. Her kindness and clear explanations really boosted my confidence in learning English.

The first sentence is in past tense ('had', 'treated', 'explained'), so the follow-up sentence should also be past tense ('boosted') to maintain consistency. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense within related sentences describing past events.

× No, I don't have a contact details, which is a pity.

✓ No, I don't have contact details, which is a pity.

The noun 'details' is plural, so using the singular article 'a' is incorrect. Removing 'a' fixes the quantifier/article error. Suggestion: for plural nouns like 'details' do not use 'a'. Use 'a contact detail' only if singular and appropriate.

× Social media wasn't very popular when I was at primary school so we never stayed in touch after I left.

✓ Social media wasn't very popular when I was at primary school, so we didn't stay in touch after I left.

The phrase 'we never stayed in touch' is understandable but 'didn't stay in touch' is a clearer past-tense negative parallel with 'wasn't'. Also adding a comma improves sentence flow. Suggestion: use consistent simple past forms for connected past events and include commas before coordinating conjunctions linking independent clauses.

× When I was a shy student, 1 teacher helped me by encouraging me to speak in class and giving me smarter to build my confidence.

✓ When I was a shy student, one teacher helped me by encouraging me to speak in class and giving me advice to build my confidence.

The original has multiple errors: '1' is a digit instead of the word 'one', 'giving me smarter' is ungrammatical—likely intended 'giving me smart advice' or 'giving me advice'. I changed it to 'giving me advice' for clarity and correct grammar. Suggestion: avoid numerals in running text and ensure the noun following 'giving me' is appropriate (e.g., 'advice', 'praise', 'feedback').

× Because of a patient praise and extra support after lessons, I gradually felt more confident participating in class.

✓ Because of patient praise and extra support after lessons, I gradually felt more confident participating in class.

The article 'a' before 'patient praise' is unnecessary because 'praise' is an uncountable noun in this context. Removing 'a' corrects the adjective/article combination. Suggestion: use uncountable noun phrases without 'a' (e.g., 'patient praise', 'extra support').