Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır, ancak daha doğal ve akıcı bir ifade için cümle yapısını düzeltin ve bir örnek veya neden ekleyin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birleştirin. Örneğin: kendinizi tanımlayan bir açıklama + neden (alışkanlık/rahatlık) + kısa örnek (örneğin evdeki bir uygulama).

예시: Yes, I do. I'm quite a tidy person because I feel more relaxed in an organized environment, for example I always put my shoes away and make my bed each morning.

제안: Cümlede dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var; ayrıca daha açık ve spesifik detaylar ekleyin. Geçmiş alışkanlığı anlatırken 'used to' ifadesini doğru kullanın, 'because' ile nedeni bağlayın ve annenizin ne yaptığına dair bir örnek verin. Türkçe olarak: 'Geçmişte böyle miydiniz' sorusuna net bir konu cümlesi, sebep ve örnek ekleyin.

예시: Yes, I used to. My mother was very organized and she taught me to tidy my room every weekend, for example I had to put toys in boxes and fold my clothes.

제안: Cevabınız negatif ve karışık; açık bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın ve nedenini mantıklı bağlaçlarla verin. Hatalı dilbilgisi (I am work, I need more books) düzeltilmeli. Eğer dağınık olduğunuzu kabul ediyorsanız, bunu düzenleme yöntemleriyle dengeleyin (örneğin düzenleme alışkanlıkları veya çözümler).

예시: To be honest, I struggle to keep my study space tidy because I often have many books and papers out. However, I try to organize them by using shelves and a weekly clean-up routine.

제안: İfade belirsiz ve dilbilgisi hataları var; "necessary" sorusuna doğrudan cevap verin, gerekçenizi net bir şekilde belirtin ve mümkünse bir sonuç veya örnek ekleyin. Bağlaçlarla mantıklı akış sağlayın. Türkçe: gerekçe sunarken 'çünkü' ile bağlayın ve sonucu belirtin.

예시: Yes, I believe it is necessary because a tidy environment helps me concentrate and reduces stress, so I can work more efficiently.

× Yes, I like, I'm a very tidy person.

✓ Yes, I like to keep things tidy; I'm a very tidy person.

The original sentence omits the verb 'to keep' after 'like' when referring to an activity. Use 'like to keep' or 'like keeping' to express preference. Also add a semicolon or conjunction to connect the two clauses for clarity. Suggestion: 'I like to keep things tidy' or 'I like keeping things tidy.'

× Yes I did because my mom is very organized people person and she's always teach me how to be clean and tidy.

✓ Yes, I did because my mom is a very organized person and she always taught me how to be clean and tidy.

Errors: incorrect noun phrase 'organized people person' and wrong verb tense 'teach' with 'she's always'. Use 'a very organized person' and simple past 'taught' because the action of teaching happened in the past. Also remove contraction 'she's' before a past verb; use 'she' + past verb. Suggestion: 'My mom is a very organized person, and she always taught me how to be clean and tidy.'

× I am very bad at keeping my workspace study place tidy because I am work lots of books and I need more books.

✓ I am very bad at keeping my workspace or study place tidy because I work with lots of books and I need more books.

Problems: awkward phrase 'workspace study place' — use 'workspace or study place'. 'I am work' is ungrammatical; use 'I work with' or 'I have' when talking about handling many books. The correction uses present simple 'I work with lots of books' to describe a habitual situation. Suggestion: 'I work with lots of books and I need more books.' or better: 'I work with many books.'

× Yes, I think and yes I know being tidy is very good for the brain and it's giving for us brain more workable.

✓ Yes, I think being tidy is very good for the brain and it makes our brains more effective.

Errors: redundant 'yes' and awkward phrase 'it's giving for us brain more workable'. Use 'it makes our brains more effective' or 'it helps our brains work better'. Maintain present simple to express general truth. Suggestion: 'Being tidy is good for the brain and helps it work better.'