Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子表達不夠流暢且有多處語法和用詞錯誤（如 because 重複、tightness 用詞不當、follow her piece 不自然）。回答應直接開門見山說明喜歡與否，接著用一到兩句具體原因或例子支持，避免重複並使用更恰當的詞彙。可以提升連貫性與語言準確性。

예시: Yes, I do. I grew up with a grandmother who always kept the house very orderly, so I learned to organize my things from an early age. For example, I always put books back on the shelf and sort my clothes by type to keep my room tidy.

제안: 表達混亂且語法錯誤較多（時態、被動或主動、重複詞彙如 to to、in in）。回答應先直接回答 yes/no，然後用一兩個清楚的原因或例子說明童年習慣，注意時態一致與句子簡潔。

예시: Not really. I was quite messy as a child and my mother often scolded me for leaving toys everywhere. I found it hard to keep things tidy because I preferred playing to cleaning, so my room was often untidy until she helped me tidy up.

제안: 整體意思清楚但有部分詞彙和用法不準確（例如 today's study award 應為 today's study work 或 tasks）。建議開頭直接陳述方法，接著用連接詞補充細節並提供實際例子，句子保持簡潔自然。

예시: I keep my study space tidy by only taking out the materials I need for that day's work and putting them away as soon as I finish. For example, I place my textbooks and notes back on the shelf and clear my desk every evening so it’s ready for the next day.

제안: 表達觀點清楚但有語法與用詞問題（cherish high quality life、left the quality of your own 不自然）。建議先直接表明觀點，然後用兩個具體理由支持，使用連接詞如 because 或 so 並注意詞序與搭配。

예시: Yes, I do. Being tidy makes a good impression on others and also improves your own efficiency. For instance, when my desk is organized I can find documents quickly and I feel less stressed, so I can work more effectively.

× Of course I'm fond of tidying things because I because of my grandma who is a person, pays much attention on the tightness of items, so I will try to follow her piece.

✓ Of course I'm fond of tidying things because my grandma pays much attention to the tidiness of things, so I try to follow her example.

有多处介词和表达错误： 1) "because I because of my grandma who is a person" 结构重复且冗余，改为简洁的"because my grandma"。 2) "pays much attention on" 应为固定搭配"pay attention to"；中文解释：动词短语"pay attention"后接介词"to"。 3) "the tightness of items" 用词不自然，应改为更常用的名词"the tidiness of things"（物品整洁）。 4) "follow her piece" 用词错误，应为"follow her example"（效仿她）。 建议：注意固定搭配（pay attention to）；避免重复短语，使用更自然的名词搭配（tidiness, example）。

× When I was a child I didn't have the good habit. I was punishment many times by my mother to to make my room very in in a mess because I found it was difficult to keep it clean and I will mess up again after cleaning.

✓ When I was a child I didn't have the habit of keeping my room tidy. I was punished many times by my mother for making my room a mess because I found it difficult to keep it clean and I would mess it up again after cleaning.

主要为时态与被动语态、句子结构问题： 1) "I didn't have the good habit" 改为更自然的"I didn't have the habit of keeping my room tidy"。 2) "I was punishment" 应为被动过去分词形式"I was punished"（past participle 引导被动）。 3) "to to make my room very in in a mess" 语序和多余词错误，改为"for making my room a mess"（表示原因的短语）。 4) 句末时态不连贯，原句混用一般现在与将来时，改为过去将来或过去习惯"I would mess it up again"更符合叙述过去习惯。 建议：被动语态用过去时要用past participle（punished）；表达习惯性过去动作可用"would"或"used to"；注意去除重复词。

× For me, I will only take the essential item for today's study award and put it back as soon as I finish the task. In this way it will make my workplace clean and tidy.

✓ For me, I only take the essential items for today's study and put them back as soon as I finish the tasks. In this way, my workspace stays clean and tidy.

存在动名词/名词复数及时态语义问题： 1) "will only take" 在表习惯时不用将来时，改为一般现在时"only take"或"I usually only take"。 2) "essential item" 应为复数"essential items"与后文的复数任务一致；代词要与之对应，故用"put them back"。 3) "study award" 词不当，推测为"study"相关物品，改为"for today's study"；如果是指课程则可更换。 4) "it will make my workplace clean" 结构生硬，改为更自然的结果表达"my workspace stays clean and tidy"。 建议：描述习惯用一般现在时；注意名词单复数一致及代词指代；用更自然的固定搭配（workspace, stay clean）。

× Of course, being a tidy person will not only make others perceive you as a person who cherish high quality life, but will also left the quality of your own, of yourself.

✓ Of course, being a tidy person will not only make others perceive you as someone who cherishes a high-quality life, but will also improve the quality of your own life.

主要为词类和动词形式错误： 1) "who cherish" 主语为"someone"，应使用第三人称单数动词形式"cherishes"（第三人称单数问题）。 2) "high quality life" 习惯用连字符或加定冠词，改为"a high-quality life"。 3) "will also left the quality of your own, of yourself" 用词及语态错误，"left"不合适，应为"improve the quality of your own life"或"improve your own quality of life"。 建议：注意主谓一致（第三人称单数）；使用恰当动词（improve）表达提升质量；名词短语用法更自然（quality of life）。