Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and correct word choice, give a clear topic sentence then a short reason. Avoid contradictions (steady vs tidy) and use precise phrases (time-sensitive means managing time, not avoiding tidiness). Keep it within 2–3 sentences and link reason with because or so.

예시: No, I don't usually keep things tidy because I'm short on time and prioritize other tasks. As a result, I often leave small chores until later, which makes my living space messier.

제안: Use correct past tense and simple, clear structure: say a direct topic sentence, then give a brief reason with a linking word. Remove hesitations and repetitions. Example include a specific detail about your mother's role and perhaps one contrastive detail.

예시: No, I didn't use to keep my room tidy because my mother always cleaned it for me. I remember she would tidy up every weekend, so I never learned to organize my things then.

제안: Don't respond with 'I don't know.' Prepare a simple, factual answer: state one or two concrete habits and use linking words to connect them. Keep it within 1–3 sentences and give a specific example of what you do.

예시: I try to keep my desk tidy by clearing papers at the end of each day and putting pens in a holder. This routine helps me find things quickly when I study.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then a concise reason with a concrete effect. Fix grammar (necessary to be tidy / necessary to keep things tidy). Avoid repetitions and use linking words (because, so). Provide a brief example of how tidiness helps concentration.

예시: Yes, I think it's necessary to be tidy because a clean environment helps me concentrate and reduces stress. For example, when my desk is organized I can focus on studying for longer without searching for materials.

× I don't like to keep things steady because I'm a very time sensitive person. That's why I don't like to keep things tidy.

✓ I don't like to keep things tidy because I'm a very time-sensitive person. That's why I don't like to keep things tidy.

The word 'steady' is incorrect in this context; 'tidy' is the correct adjective for neatness. Also 'time sensitive' describing a person should be hyphenated as 'time-sensitive' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Replace 'steady' with 'tidy' and hyphenate 'time-sensitive' to improve clarity.

× No, I didn't used to keep my room tidy because my mother do the work. They he he didn't give me the allow the she didn't give me allow the work.

✓ No, I didn't use to keep my room tidy because my mother did the work and she didn't allow me to do the work.

After 'did' the base form 'use' should be used, not 'used' ('didn't use to'). 'Do' should be in past tense 'did' to match the past context. The sentence also has word order and extra fragments; combine clauses properly and use 'allow me to do the work' for correct verb pattern.

× Uh, I don't know.

✓ Uh, I don't know how to keep it tidy.

The original short response is not a grammatical error but lacks relevance to the question 'How do you keep your work or study space tidy?'. Providing a complete sentence that answers the question improves coherence and sentence structure.

× I think it's very important for to be tidy because it gives me to it gives me idea to concentrate on my study and work without tidiness.

✓ I think it's very important to be tidy because it helps me concentrate on my study and work.

Use the infinitive 'to be tidy' rather than 'for to be tidy'. The phrase 'gives me idea to concentrate' is incorrect; use 'helps me concentrate' or 'allows me to concentrate'. Remove 'without tidiness' which contradicts the meaning.

× I don't think anyone can be goo gooped concentration on their work or.

✓ I don't think anyone can concentrate well on their work without tidiness.

The original contains unintelligible words 'goo gooped' and incomplete structure. Use the verb 'concentrate' and adverb 'well' for manner. Add 'without tidiness' to complete the thought; ensure pronoun agreement with 'anyone' by using singular 'their' as acceptable gender-neutral usage.