Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct answer and ask for clarification briefly if needed. Instead of asking 'what a tidy means', say 'Could you please explain what you mean by "tidy"?' or attempt to answer with your understanding: 'If you mean keeping things clean and organized, yes, I do.' Keep it to one sentence when asking for clarification.

예시: Do you mean tidy as in clean and organized? If so, yes, I like to keep my things organized so I can find them easily.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases. For example: 'Not really — my mother usually cleaned my room when I was a child, so I was relaxed about tidying.' Then add a brief reason: 'Because of that, I didn't develop a strong habit of keeping my room tidy.'

예시: Not really — my mother usually cleaned my room when I was a child, so I rarely tidied it myself. As a result, I didn’t form a habit of organizing my things when I was young.

제안: Answer directly about methods you use to keep the space tidy, then give a supporting detail or example. Use linking words like 'so' or 'for example'. Avoid irrelevant info about timetable unless it relates to tidiness. For example: 'I keep my study space tidy by clearing my desk after each session and storing books on a shelf, so my workspace stays organized.'

예시: I keep my study space tidy by clearing my desk after each study session and putting papers into folders. For example, I always store pens in a cup and put finished books back on the shelf so the area stays organized.

제안: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give two concise reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Avoid repetition and filler words. For example: 'Yes — being tidy is important because it shows responsibility and helps you work more efficiently.' Then add a brief example of how tidiness benefits daily life.

예시: Yes — being tidy is important because it shows responsibility and helps you focus and work more efficiently. For example, a neat desk makes it easier to find documents quickly and reduces stress.

× Sorry, what a tidy means.

✓ Sorry, what does tidy mean?

The sentence misorders auxiliary and subject for a question and uses incorrect article 'a' before an adjective. Use 'does' for a present simple question about meaning and place the adjective after the verb: 'what does tidy mean?'. Suggestion: Use 'What does + subject + base verb' for definitions (What does X mean?).

× Casually on my cleaned by my mother and I am very uh relaxed and lethargic as well.

✓ Usually my room was cleaned by my mother and I was very relaxed and lethargic as well.

The original mixes adverb choice and passive structure incorrectly and uses present 'am' while describing past habit. Use 'usually' for habitual actions, passive past 'was cleaned', and past 'was' to match timeframe. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent when describing past habits and use adverbs correctly (usually, occasionally).

× I don't uh, keep my from TD.

✓ I don't, uh, keep my room tidy.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear ('from TD' makes no sense). Replace with clear object 'my room tidy' and use 'keep' with object plus adjective. Suggestion: 'keep' + object + adjective (keep my room tidy).

× Uh, you, uh, usually I like to work at my daytime and I study, uh, at the night.

✓ Usually I like to work during the day and I study at night.

Use correct time expressions: 'during the day' and 'at night' (not 'my daytime' or 'the night'). Remove extraneous filler words and keep simple present for habits. Suggestion: Use 'during the day' for daytime activities and 'at night' for nighttime.

× This is very, uh, good and perfect timetable for me and it's a helps me to space steady.

✓ This is a very good and perfect timetable for me and it helps me stay steady.

Articles and noun forms were incorrect ('a helps me' is wrong). Use 'a very good and perfect timetable' with article 'a'; 'helps me stay steady' uses base verb after 'helps' and correct verb 'stay' instead of 'to space'. Suggestion: After 'helps', use the base verb (helps me do something).

× Absolutely. It is very necessary to be teddy because uh, uh, a good teddy means the how responsible and how, uh, accountable and how you organize to work.

✓ Absolutely. It is very necessary to be tidy because a good tidiness shows how responsible and accountable you are and how well you organize your work.

Multiple errors: 'teddy' should be 'tidy' or 'tidiness'; 'a good tidy' is incorrect—use 'tidiness' or 'being tidy'; 'means the how' is ungrammatical. Use 'shows how' plus adjective and correct noun phrases. Also reorder 'organize your work'. Suggestion: Use 'tidy' as adjective or 'tidiness' as noun; use 'shows how + adjective' to describe qualities.

× I think it is very important for every individual who lives in a society.

✓ I think it is very important for every individual living in a society.

Relative clause 'who lives in a society' can be reduced to the participial phrase 'living in a society' for conciseness. Both are grammatical, but the reduced form is more natural. Suggestion: Use participle reduction when the subject is the same (every individual living...).