Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and direct with good reasons. To improve, vary sentence structures and add a brief specific example to make it more vivid. Also avoid slightly repetitive phrasing (e.g., ‘neat’ and ‘tidy’ close together).

예시: Yes, I do. Staying organized helps me concentrate and saves time. For instance, when my notes are clearly labeled and filed, I can review them quickly before exams and avoid scrambling for materials.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and repetition. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, using past habits language correctly, and adding a specific example of how you kept your room tidy.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents encouraged me to tidy up every day, so it became a habit. For example, I always put my toys in labeled boxes and made my bed before breakfast.

제안: Good concise answer with a clear strategy. Improve by correcting small grammar issues and adding a concrete routine or method you follow, using a linking phrase to connect idea and example.

예시: I follow a minimalist approach: I keep only essential items on my desk and avoid buying unnecessary things. For instance, I clear my desk every evening, file loose papers, and keep pens in a single holder.

제안: Your response gives reasons and an example but has a few language errors and repetition. Improve clarity by refining vocabulary (e.g., 'task is neat' not 'net'), using linking words, and providing a specific concrete result of being tidy.

예시: Yes, I believe it’s necessary. A tidy workspace reduces distractions and boosts productivity. For example, when my workspace is neat I can locate study materials quickly and complete assignments faster.

× I loved to keep things, keep my toys and some.

✓ I loved keeping my things, such as my toys.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect coordination ('and some' is incomplete). Use a gerund 'keeping' to match 'loved' and provide a clear example phrase 'such as' to list items. Suggestion: combine ideas into one complete clause and list examples clearly.

× I have a minimalist approach by keeping only essentials and avoid buying unnecessary things.

✓ I have a minimalist approach by keeping only the essentials and avoiding buying unnecessary things.

After 'by' use the -ing form for both verbs to maintain parallel gerund structure. 'Essentials' needs the definite article 'the' here. Suggestion: use parallel -ing forms and include articles correctly.

× That really helps me to stay organized.

✓ That really helps me stay organized.

This is minor: the infinitive 'to stay' is acceptable, but native usage often omits 'to' after 'helps' (helps someone do something). Suggestion: remove 'to' for more natural phrasing: 'helps me stay organized.'

× Yes, I think being tidy is important because it creates an organized environment and helps productivity, whereas clutter can be distracting and time consuming.

✓ Yes, I think being tidy is important because it creates an organized environment and helps productivity, whereas clutter can be distracting and time-consuming.

Compound adjective 'time-consuming' should be hyphenated when used before or after a noun. This is a punctuation/word-formation issue affecting clarity. Suggestion: hyphenate compound modifiers like 'time-consuming.'

× For example, when my task is net, I finish tasks faster and I feel less distracted.

✓ For example, when my tasks are neat, I finish them faster and feel less distracted.

Multiple errors: 'task is net' has misspelling and agreement issues. Use plural 'tasks' with plural verb 'are' if referring generally, or rephrase to singular consistently. Replace 'net' with 'neat.' Also use pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition and drop redundant 'I'. Suggestion: ensure noun/verb number agreement and correct spelling.