Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep your answer concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you like to keep things tidy, then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Use correct verb tenses and simpler phrasing (avoid repeating words). Use a linking word to connect your reason.

예시: Yes, I do like to keep things tidy. For example, I use a memo app to plan my daily tasks so I don’t forget anything, and when I don’t make a plan I feel anxious and disorganized.

제안: Answer directly and improve grammar and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence about your childhood habit, then give a specific routine and a brief comment. Use correct expressions (e.g., “when I was young”, “twice a week”) and avoid contradictory or unclear statements without explanation.

예시: Yes, I used to keep my room tidy when I was a child. I would clean and organize it twice a week because I enjoyed having everything in order, although my family sometimes called me lazy when I skipped a day.

× Yes, I always planned, planned what to do and what am I gonna do in the future in my memo application if I don't do any, If I didn't do any plan, then I feel.

✓ Yes, I always plan and write what to do and what I am going to do in the future in my memo application; if I don't make any plans, then I feel lost.

The student used past tense 'planned' and mixed informal 'am I gonna' which do not match the present-habit context. Use simple present 'plan' for habitual actions and formal 'I am going to' for future intention. Also change 'do any plan' to 'make any plans' for correct collocation and add 'lost' to complete the thought. Grammar problem type: Present tense issue (ID 6).

× Yes, even I was in young age, I always clean my room and make sure everything is organized.

✓ Yes, even when I was young, I always cleaned my room and made sure everything was organized.

The sentence mixes past time reference 'when I was young' with present-tense verbs 'clean' and 'make'. For actions habitually done in the past, use past simple 'cleaned' and 'made sure'. Also use the idiomatic phrase 'when I was young' instead of 'in young age'. Grammar problem type: Past tense issue (ID 5).

× I usually clean my room every twice a week and I really enjoy at that time.

✓ I usually clean my room twice a week and I really enjoy it at that time.

The phrase 'every twice a week' is ungrammatical; use 'twice a week' for frequency. Also 'enjoy at that time' should be 'enjoy it at that time' or simply 'enjoy it'. Correct quantifier and add the object pronoun 'it'. Grammar problem type: Incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14).

× But they say I'm quite lazy so I'm not doing all.

✓ But people say I'm quite lazy, so I don't do everything.

'They say' is vague but acceptable; however 'I'm not doing all' is ungrammatical. Use 'I don't do everything' to express not doing all tasks. Change continuous 'I'm not doing' to simple present 'I don't do' for habitual behavior. Grammar problem type: Incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).