Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “No, I didn’t enjoy going to parks as a child.”). Avoid repetition and grammatical errors: use past tense consistently (“I didn’t like going outside”) and correct verb forms. Add one brief reason or example to support your answer and use a linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”). Keep your response to 1–3 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t enjoy going to parks as a child because I preferred staying indoors and playing at home. For example, I liked reading books and playing video games more than running around outside.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence about your current preference and follow with a concise reason. Use present simple or present perfect appropriately (“Now I prefer shopping with friends”) and correct phrasing (“I don’t hate parks” or “I still enjoy them sometimes”). Use a linking word such as “but” or “however” correctly and finish the sentence fully.

예시: Now I prefer going shopping with my friends, but I don’t dislike parks. I sometimes visit parks to relax or exercise when I want some fresh air.

제안: Answer directly and give a specific reason. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “I agree” or “Yes, I would”) and complete sentences. Explain why more parks are needed with specific supporting details (e.g., shade, green spaces, places to exercise) and use linking words like “because” to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because summers in Taiwan are very hot, and parks with trees and shaded areas would give people a cooler place to relax and exercise. For instance, shaded picnic areas and water features could make parks more comfortable in summer.

제안: Be specific about future intentions and use correct modal verbs (“might” or “may”) and phrasing (“I don’t have a specific park in mind right now”). Provide a short reason or a possible example of the type of park you might visit in the future. Keep it to one or two concise sentences and use linking words like “however” or “maybe”.

예시: I don’t have a specific park in mind at the moment, but I might visit a national park in the future because I’d like to experience nature and hiking trails. For example, I would like to explore a forested park with waterfalls if I get the chance.

× I I will say no because I remember when I was a child, I don't like go to outside and even the work.

✓ I will say no because I remember that when I was a child I didn't like going outside or doing tasks.

Multiple issues: incorrect tense (present 'don't' should be past 'didn't') and incorrect verb form ('go to outside' should be 'going outside') and awkward structure ('and even the work' unclear; corrected to 'or doing tasks'). Combine clauses with 'that' for clarity and maintain past tense for a past-time reference. Suggestion: Use past tense for childhood memories and use gerunds after verbs expressing preference (didn't like doing / going).

× So yeah, I, I don't like to go to parks.

✓ So yeah, I didn't like going to parks.

The sentence refers to childhood, so present tense 'don't like' is incorrect; it should be past 'didn't like'. Also use gerund 'going' after 'like' for general preference. Suggestion: Match tense to context and use 'like + gerund' for activities.

× When I get older I feel like I'm more prefer go to like shopping with my friends but.

✓ Now that I'm older, I prefer going shopping with my friends.

Tense and verb form errors: 'When I get older' implies future but speaker means present—use 'now that I'm older'. 'I'm more prefer' is incorrect (use 'prefer' without 'more' or auxiliary). Use gerund 'going shopping'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' for comparisons and follow with a gerund or 'to' infinitive consistently.

× I don't hate go to parks, I just like very.

✓ I don't hate going to parks; I just don't like them very much.

Incorrect verb form 'go to parks' should be gerund 'going to parks'. 'I just like very' is incomplete; it needs an object or adverbial 'very much'. Also use pronoun 'them' to refer to parks. Suggestion: Complete the idea with 'very much' and use correct pronoun and gerund.

× I'm more practicing my city because in Taiwan, uh, especially in the summer, the sun is uh, really, really hot, so more parks that you can go to uh, like, uh.

✓ I care more about my city because in Taiwan, especially in the summer, the sun is really hot, so we need more parks to visit.

'I'm more practicing my city' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely meant 'I care more about my city' or 'I prefer parks in my city'. 'So more parks that you can go to' is a fragment—rephrase to 'so we need more parks to visit.' Suggestion: Use clear verbs (care, need) and complete clauses; avoid filler words and provide a clear reason-result structure.

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

This question sentence is correct as written; no grammatical change needed. It properly uses plural 'parks' and matches the question form and tense. Suggestion: None.

× MMM, I don't have any parts that I really want to go right now.

✓ I don't have any parks that I really want to visit right now.

Typo and word choice: 'parts' should be 'parks'. 'Want to go' is acceptable but 'want to visit' is more natural when referring to places. Maintain present tense 'right now'. Suggestion: Use the correct noun and a natural verb for visiting places.

× Uh, but in the future I'm not sure.

✓ But in the future I'm not sure.

This sentence is acceptable but very brief; grammatically correct. It uses present tense to express uncertainty about the future which is natural. Suggestion: To be clearer, add 'what I will want' or similar: 'But in the future I'm not sure what I will want.'

× Maybe I someday I will like very interesting in the natural, so I will look it up.

✓ Maybe someday I'll be very interested in nature, so I will look it up.

Multiple issues: redundant 'I someday I'; word order and verb form errors. Use 'be interested in' rather than 'like very interesting in'. 'Nature' is the correct noun. 'Look it up' is informal but acceptable; ensure pronoun 'it' refers to information about natural places. Suggestion: Use 'be interested in' + noun and simplify to 'Maybe someday I'll be very interested in nature.'