Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use correct past tense and infinitives (e.g., "used to go", "to play"). Make the answer more concise with a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and avoid repetition. Add a linking phrase to connect sentences smoothly.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to go there to play games such as badminton and to hang out with my friends. For example, when I was six years old I went to a park with my mother for the first time, and I remember feeling excited to explore the playground.

제안: Correct articles and plural forms, and organize ideas: start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific routine details. Use linking words like "usually" and "sometimes" correctly and limit to 2–3 sentences to be natural.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. On weekends I usually go with my parents, and sometimes friends join us so we walk or run on the park track together.

제안: Be direct and coherent: answer the question clearly (yes/no and why), avoid repetition, and provide a specific reason or example. Use correct plural forms and clearer linking (e.g., "because", "for example").

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks because existing parks get crowded on weekends. For example, although my city has many parks such as Jindal Park, they are often full, so additional green spaces would improve access for everyone.

제안: Fix modal verbs and word choice: use "I've heard" instead of "I listen everyone" and remove unnecessary politeness like "Sir". State intention clearly with correct form ("I would definitely go" or "I will definitely visit"). Add one specific reason why you want to go.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Rose Garden in Chandigarh in the future because I have heard it is very beautiful and full of colorful flowers. If I have a chance, I will definitely visit to take photos and enjoy the scenery.

× I used to going park for play some games such as badminton and hang out with my friend.

✓ I used to go to the park to play games such as badminton and hang out with my friends.

The phrase 'used to' is followed by the base verb, not the -ing form, so 'used to going' should be 'used to go'. 'Go' requires the preposition 'to' before 'the park'. 'For play' is incorrect; use the infinitive 'to play' or 'to play games'. 'Friend' should be plural if speaking generally about friends. Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb, include correct prepositions, and match noun number.

× I remember when I was when I was 6 year old, that was the first time I went to park with my mother.

✓ I remember when I was six years old; that was the first time I went to the park with my mother.

Number words like ages are written as 'six years old' and require plural 'years'. The clause had a repeated phrase 'when I was'. 'Went' is correct past tense but needs the article 'the' before 'park'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use 'six years old', and include 'the park'.

× Yes, on weekend I usually go to park with my parents and also sometime my friend meet us there and we spend a lot of time there and in park on track.

✓ Yes, on weekends I usually go to the park with my parents, and sometimes my friends meet us there; we spend a lot of time there and on the park track.

Use plural 'weekends' for recurring events. 'Go to the park' needs the article 'the'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'Friend meet' must agree in number: 'friends meet' or 'a friend meets'. 'In park on track' is incorrect preposition/order; use 'on the park track' or 'on the track in the park'. Suggestion: use plural forms for habitual actions, correct adverb 'sometimes', subject-verb agreement for 'friends meet', and proper prepositions.

× Usually one weekend I always go to park park.

✓ Usually on one weekend I always go to the park.

The sentence has a duplicated word 'park park' and incorrect time expression. Use 'on one weekend' or better 'on weekends' for habitual actions. Include article 'the' before 'park'. Suggestion: remove duplicates and use correct time preposition 'on' and article 'the'.

× Usually in my city there are lots of park.

✓ Usually in my city there are lots of parks.

The quantifier 'lots of' requires a plural noun: 'parks' not 'park'. Suggestion: make the noun plural with quantifiers.

× I always go there one by one.

✓ I always visit them one by one.

The pronoun 'there' is vague; use 'them' to refer to multiple parks. 'Go there one by one' is understandable but 'visit them one by one' is clearer. Also ensure verb fits plural objects. Suggestion: use precise pronouns and verbs that agree with plural objects.

× In my city one of famous park is Jindal Park.

✓ In my city, one of the famous parks is Jindal Park.

The phrase 'one of famous park' is incorrect word order and number. Use 'one of the famous parks' (plural 'parks' and include 'the'). Suggestion: use 'one of the' + plural noun structure for this expression and include comma after introductory phrase.

× There so many.

✓ There are so many.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' for existence. 'There are so many' completes the existential construction. Suggestion: include the correct form of 'there be' (there are/is) to express quantity.

× Yes Sir, in future I would like to go Rose Garden in Chandigarh because I listen everyone, it is a very beautiful and fantastic park.

✓ Yes, Sir. In the future I would like to go to the Rose Garden in Chandigarh because I have heard from everyone that it is a very beautiful and fantastic park.

Use 'in the future' for time phrase and 'would like to go to' requires preposition 'to' before a place. 'Go Rose Garden' lacks 'to the'. 'I listen everyone' is incorrect; use 'I have heard from everyone' or 'everyone says'. Suggestion: use correct time expressions, include 'to' and 'the' for specific place names, and use 'have heard' or 'everyone says' for reported information.

× So I if I have a chance in future, I definitely go there.

✓ So if I have a chance in the future, I will definitely go there.

For a likely future plan, use 'will' + base verb: 'I will definitely go'. Include 'the' in 'in the future'. The original had an extra 'I' after 'So' and incorrect tense. Suggestion: remove extra words and use 'will' for future intentions.