Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your reply more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail to support your answer. Also limit to 2–4 sentences and use linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because I love natural landscapes. For example, I often take photos of mountains and rivers when I travel, because the changing light creates interesting moods.

제안: Correct grammar and choose clearer vocabulary. Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, so). Avoid redundancy and fix verb and article errors.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer more natural scenery, such as fields, forests and wildflowers. For example, I like photographing winding country roads and old farmhouses, which feel peaceful and photogenic.

제안: Reduce hesitation and repetition. Give a clear, concise answer (e.g., I prefer both) and add a specific reason or example. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated phrases.

예시: I prefer views in both my own country and abroad because each offers something different. For instance, my country has familiar historic sites and landscapes I love, while other countries provide new architectural styles and cultures that inspire my photography.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views since I love the landscapes and the sceneries and I love the nature.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views since I love landscapes, scenery, and nature.

The noun phrases are awkward and include unnecessary definite articles and plural forms. 'The landscapes' and 'the sceneries' are better as general nouns 'landscapes' and 'scenery' (scenery is uncountable). 'The nature' should be 'nature' (uncountable). Combine similar items with commas for clarity.

× I prepare views in rural areas because rural areas have has different more sceneries like the landscapes and the more nature ambience and more plants, trees and flowers to be seen.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas have different scenery, like landscapes, more natural ambience, and more plants, trees, and flowers to see.

Multiple issues: 'prepare' is incorrect verb choice for preference; use 'prefer'. 'Have has' is a duplication error; use 'have'. 'Sceneries' should be 'scenery' (uncountable). 'Different more' is incorrect word order; use 'different' or 'more' appropriately. 'The more nature ambience' should be 'more natural ambience'. Reorder to make the sentence natural and correct subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer views both my countries and other countries because, uh, both in, uh, in my country, uh, I, I think there's a lot of places here in the, my country that's, uh, promising and, and, and other countries too. So I like, I prefer both.

✓ I prefer views in both my country and other countries because I think there are a lot of places here in my country that are promising, and also in other countries. So I like both.

Pronoun and noun number issues: 'both my countries' is incorrect if speaker has one country; use 'both my country and other countries' or 'both my country and other countries'. 'There's a lot of places' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; use 'there are a lot of places'. Remove filler words and duplicate articles ('the my country'). Use 'that' to introduce the relative clause and ensure plural agreement with 'places'.