Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然简洁并遵循结构：先用一句主题句直接回答，然后用1–2个具体原因或例子支持，避免重复和口头禅（如“uh”、“remember remember”）。注意时态和单数/复数形式（e.g. “taking pictures”）。可以加入连接词让句子更连贯。多练习用完整句子并控制在最多5句内。

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures whenever I travel because it helps me remember special moments and places. For example, I often photograph landscapes and local markets, then share the best shots with my friends on social media. This way I can look back on trips and also get feedback from others.

제안: 回答要更流畅并避免重复，先直接给出偏好，再用一到两句具体原因支持。使用合适的词汇描述城市景观（如 “skyline”, “architecture”, “vibrant streets”），并用连接词（e.g. “because”, “for example”）增强连贯性。不要多次停顿或重复句子开头。

예시: I prefer urban views because I love the skyline and distinctive architecture of cities. The bustling streets and varied buildings make walking around exciting, and I often discover interesting cafés or photo spots while exploring.

제안: 回答需要更完整的句子并纠正语法错误（例如“travel more cheap”应为“travel more cheaply”或“it’s cheaper to travel”）。先给出直接回答，再给出两点具体原因并举例。避免结尾不完整，确保信息完整。

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the scenery and culture. Also, it’s usually cheaper and easier to travel at home, so I can visit more places and return often to take new photos.

× Absolute AB absolutely.

✓ Absolutely.

原句“Absolute AB absolutely.” 结构混乱，包含重复和拼写错误。应使用单词“Absolutely”来完整表达肯定含义。建议简洁回答，避免重复或多余字符。

× I like taking pictures uh whenever travel.

✓ I like taking pictures whenever I travel.

原句中缺少主语“I”在从句中，导致动名词短语不完整。这里应使用一般现在时表达习惯性动作，随时间状语从句需有主语。建议在从句中加上主语：“whenever I travel”。

× Taking picture helps me Remember Remember special moment and places and I also enjoy sharing pictures on social media with my friends so. I.

✓ Taking pictures helps me remember special moments and places, and I also enjoy sharing pictures on social media with my friends.

原句存在多处问题：名词复数和大小写错误（picture -> pictures；Remember 重复且不应大写）、时态与数不一致（special moment 应为复数 special moments）、句子断裂和多余词（末尾的 “so. I.”）。已按语义重组为完整句。建议注意名词单复数、不要重复单词、句子保持完整。

× Umm, there's something about special. There's something about skyline and interesting building in the city.

✓ Umm, there's something special about the skyline and interesting buildings in the city.

原句“两句重复”且词序不当。固定表达是“there's something about X”或“there's something special about X”。名词“building”应为复数“buildings”。把形容词放在名词前并合并为一句更自然。建议学习固定搭配并注意名词单复数。

× And I also enjoy walking.

✓ I also enjoy walking in the city.

原句本身语法正确，但在上下文中略显不完整，添加“in the city”可与前句衔接更清楚（可选）。解释：句子结构无误，建议根据语境补充信息使表达更完整。

× Absolutely, I like views in my own country more umm because umm I feel more connected the to the scenery in my country and I travel more cheap and easier in my.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the scenery there, and traveling is cheaper and easier for me at home.

原句存在词序与介词错误（“connected the to”顺序错误）、形容词/副词使用不当（“more cheap and easier”应为“cheaper and easier”）、句子末尾不完整（缺少“home”或“my country”完整短语）。已将句子重组为自然表达。建议注意介词搭配（connected to）、比较级规则（one-word comparatives like cheaper）以及句子完整性。