Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı; ana fikri net bir konu cümlesiyle belirtin, sonra nedenini bir veya iki destekleyici cümleyle açıklayın. Bağlaçlar (because, so, and) doğru kullanmalı ve gereksiz tekrar ve çekingen seslerden (uh) kaçının. Ayrıca “views” ve “share” gibi kelime formlarına dikkat edin.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me capture memorable moments. For example, I often take landscape photos when I travel, and I share my best shots on my social media to keep friends updated.

제안: Cevap doğrudan tercih belirtmeli ve ardından spesifik nedenler sunmalı. Tekrarlardan kaçının ("both of them" iki kere) ve kelime hatalarını düzeltin (ör. "Goose landscapes" muhtemelen "good/ gorgeous landscapes"). Bağlaçlarla mantıklı bağlantı kurun ve cümleyi tamamlayın.

예시: I don't have a strong preference because I enjoy both urban and rural views. Urban scenes inspire me with architecture and vibrant street life, while rural landscapes offer peaceful nature shots, so I photograph both depending on my mood.

제안: Cevap netlikten yoksun; önce tercih belirtin veya eşit ilgiyi ifade edin, sonra nedenleri somut örneklerle verin. Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (ör. "a good landscapes" → "good landscapes") ve anlamsız ifadelerden kaçının ("it's not much to happen").

예시: I enjoy views both at home and abroad because each offers unique features. For instance, local scenes are familiar and comfortable, while foreign landscapes provide new colors and cultural details that I like to photograph.

× Yes, I like taking pictures different view because I want to. Share my social media accounts and uh.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I want to share them on my social media accounts.

The sentence misses the preposition 'of' after 'pictures' and uses singular 'view' where plural 'views' is needed (pluralization). Also sentence fragments 'Share my social media accounts and uh' should be combined into a complete clause: 'share them on my social media accounts.' Ensure proper article and preposition usage and make the sentence a single complete clause. Suggestion: Use 'pictures of different views' and pluralize nouns to match meaning.

× I love both of them because both of make me happy and when I see Goose landscapes I want to take pictures and share my social media account and so that I can.

✓ I love both of them because both make me happy, and when I see good landscapes I want to take pictures and share them on my social media account.

The phrase 'both of make me happy' is incorrect; correct subject-verb agreement is 'both make me happy.' 'Goose' is a typo for 'good.' The clause 'share my social media account' is wrong: you share content on your account, so use 'share them on my social media account.' Also remove the unfinished 'and so that I can' fragment. Suggestion: Use 'both make' for agreement, correct typos, and use 'share them on' for correct verb-preposition collocation.

× I love both of them because when I see a good landscapes it's not much to happen.

✓ I love both of them because when I see good landscapes, not much happens.

The article and noun number are incorrect: 'a good landscapes' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove the 'a' or change to singular 'landscape.' Also 'it's not much to happen' is ungrammatical; the natural English is 'not much happens' to express that nothing significant occurs. Suggestion: Use matching article and noun number ('good landscapes' or 'a good landscape') and use the simple present 'not much happens.'