Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答内容相关且自然，但存在一些语法错误、词汇拼写和冗余。建议： 1) 修正语法和拼写（例如 interest → interesting/buildings，when we celebrating → when we are celebrating）。 2) 使用一到两句支持细节，避免重复表达（比如把拍建筑和拍朋友的原因分别简洁说明）。 3) 注意句子长度，不超过5句，并用连接词使表达连贯（e.g. also, for example）。 练习方法：把每个原因浓缩成一句话并练习几遍，关注时态和冠词。

예시: Yes, I do. I often take photos of interesting buildings when I travel because I like their unique architecture. I also capture special moments with my friends, for example when we are celebrating, to keep the memories. Sometimes I photograph the sea or the sky because their colors are beautiful.

제안: 内容表达可以理解，但句子混乱、语法时态和词序错误较多，且冗长。建议： 1) 先用一句主题句直接回答（I prefer urban views.）。 2) 用一到两句给出具体理由，注意主谓一致和修饰词顺序（interesting buildings, well-organized streets）。 3) 使用连接词（for example, because）并简化表达，避免不必要的词。

예시: I prefer urban views because there are more interesting buildings and well-organized streets. For example, parks and playgrounds are easy to find in cities, so I can take many different photos without travelling far.

제안: 回答思路良好，但有重复词、语法和词形错误（to to, picture them, view are, stumble upon 的时态和搭配）。建议： 1) 用一两句话明确比较两者的优点并用连接词衔接（However, while）。 2) 修正动词形式和名词单复数（views are, stumble upon new scenes）。 3) 提供一个简短具体例子或情景使回答更具体。

예시: It's hard to choose because I like both. In my own country I feel comfortable and can easily capture familiar scenes, while in other countries I enjoy discovering exotic views and stumbling upon new experiences, like finding a colourful market during a trip.

× Yes I do. I often take photos of interest buildings when I travel and I also like to capture special moments for my friends like when we celebrating together.

✓ Yes, I do. I often take photos of interesting buildings when I travel, and I also like to capture special moments for my friends, like when we are celebrating together.

句中“interest buildings”应为形容词形式“interesting buildings”；“when we celebrating together”缺少be动词，应为“when we are celebrating together”。建议：将名词前的词改为形容词；在进行时结构中加上适当的be动词。

× Sometimes I photograph the sky or the sea because the colors are really beautiful.

✓ Sometimes I photograph the sky or the sea because the colors are really beautiful.

句子语法正确，无需改动。这里只确认形容词用法正确。

× I prefer the view on urban area because they are more they have more interest buildings and also the street had a very good orders and well organized place like playground parks and I can take up many pictures from this place and it had really easy.

✓ I prefer the views in urban areas because they have more interesting buildings, and the streets are well ordered and organized, with playgrounds and parks where I can take many pictures easily.

原句多处介词和搭配错误： - “the view on urban area”应为介词短语“views in urban areas”； - “they are more they have more interest buildings”重复且“interest”用错，改为“they have more interesting buildings”； - “the street had a very good orders and well organized place”时态和名词形式错误，应为“the streets are well ordered and organized”； - “playground parks”重复，改为“playgrounds and parks”； - “take up many pictures”动词搭配错误，改为“take many pictures”； - “it had really easy”非标准表达，改为“easily”。 建议：注意介词in/on的用法，名词单复数一致，形容词替换名词性误用，使用正确的动词时态与搭配。

× I prefer the view on urban area because they are more they have more interest buildings and also the street had a very good orders and well organized place like playground parks and I can take up many pictures from this place and it had really easy.

✓ I prefer the views in urban areas because there are more interesting buildings, and the streets are well ordered and organized, with playgrounds and parks where I can take many pictures easily.

使用“there are”更自然地引出存在的事物：原句“they are more they have more”结构混乱，应该用“there are more interesting buildings”。同时保持主谓一致和正确的时态。建议在描述存在时使用“There is/are + 名词”结构以避免主语混淆。

× It's hard to say because I like both. In my own country everything feels familiar and comfortable so it's easy for me to to picture them, while in foreign country the view are often exotic and I enjoy stumble upon the new scenes and experiences.

✓ It's hard to say because I like both. In my own country everything feels familiar and comfortable, so it's easy for me to picture it, while in foreign countries the views are often exotic and I enjoy stumbling upon new scenes and experiences.

存在多处现在时和名词数的一致性问题： - “to to picture them”多写了一个to，且“them”指代不清，改为“to picture it”或改为复数视上下文； - “in foreign country”应为复数或加定冠词，改为“in foreign countries”； - “the view are”主谓不一致，改为“the views are”； - “I enjoy stumble upon”动名词形式错误，应为“I enjoy stumbling upon”。 建议：检查主谓一致，避免多余词汇，动词后做名词时用-ing形式。