Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: "talk photograph", "different view", "got to"). Cần dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sửa ngữ pháp và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ bằng liên từ (because, when) để câu mạch lạc. Hạn chế độ dài dưới 5 câu và dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "take photographs", "scenic views", "visit a new place".

예시: Yes, I love taking photographs of scenic views. I especially enjoy doing this when I visit a new place with my family because it helps me remember the trip. I usually focus on interesting colors and compositions to capture the atmosphere.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm giả định ("Hightower"?), và logic không đầy đủ. Bạn nên nêu rõ sở thích (urban or rural), đưa lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ (because, so) để làm rõ. Tránh lặp từ và sửa cấu trúc như "I prefer urban views because..." hoặc "I prefer rural scenes because...".

예시: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy of city life and the variety of architecture. For example, tall buildings and busy streets often create dramatic scenes that are interesting to photograph.

제안: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng biểu đạt lặp và có các vần ngập, từ không chính xác ("refer my sea view"). Cần trả lời trực tiếp (own country or other countries), sau đó giải thích cụ thể với ví dụ và liên từ. Tránh tiếng ừ à, rút gọn câu để tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer views in my own country, especially the seaside, because the sea is very peaceful. Whenever I look at the ocean I feel relaxed, and the sunsets there are particularly beautiful, which makes them my favorite scenes to photograph.

× Absolutely yes. I really like to talk photograph of different view, especially when I got to a new place with my family.

✓ Absolutely. I really like to take photographs of different views, especially when I go to a new place with my family.

Errors: 'talk photograph' is incorrect word choice and verb collocation; correct verb is 'take photographs' (use of noun plural 'photographs' for countable objects). 'Different view' needs plural 'views'. 'When I got to a new place' mixes past tense with a general habit; use present simple 'when I go' to describe habitual action. Suggestions: use correct collocations ('take photographs'), match noun number (views), and use present simple for habitual actions.

× For me, I think that I will refer a urban view, urban areas, because I live. While watching Hightower.

✓ For me, I think that I prefer an urban view or urban areas because I live in a city and like watching high towers.

Errors: 'refer a urban view' is incorrect verb and article usage; 'refer' is wrong verb—use 'prefer'. 'a urban' should be 'an urban' because 'urban' begins with a vowel sound. 'because I live.' is incomplete; needs object (e.g. 'in a city'). 'While watching Hightower' is unclear and likely wrong word choice/capitalization; use 'watching high towers' or 'tall buildings'. Suggestions: use correct verb 'prefer', correct article 'an', complete the clause 'I live in a city', and use precise nouns ('tall buildings' or 'high towers').

× I think I will, I think that I refer my sea view because it's very peaceful and, uh. Whenever I watch it I feel very relaxed.

✓ I think I prefer my sea view because it's very peaceful. Whenever I look at it, I feel very relaxed.

Errors: 'I think I will' incorrectly uses future when expressing preference; use present 'I think I prefer'. 'I refer my sea view' uses wrong verb 'refer'—use 'prefer' and include possessive 'my' correctly with 'sea view'. 'Whenever I watch it' is slightly odd for scenery—use 'look at it'. Suggestions: use present tense for current preferences, choose correct verb 'prefer', and use natural verb for viewing scenery ('look at' or 'see').