Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn nói rất tự nhiên và truyền đạt được ý chính nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp, phát âm một số từ, và rút gọn lặp ý. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và chia động từ (taking picture -> taking pictures; always taking -> always take). (2) Tránh nói thêm từ để lấp (ví dụ "you know"); nói gọn trong tối đa 5 câu. (3) Thêm chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn (ví dụ nêu loại cảnh hoặc cảm xúc khi chụp) và dùng liên từ phù hợp để mạch lạc (e.g., when, because).

예시: I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like capturing memorable moments when I travel abroad. For example, I often photograph city skylines and colorful markets when I visit new places. I also take candid photos with my friends at new restaurants to remember our time together.

제안: Bạn trả lời rõ vị thích thành phố nhưng nhiều lỗi phát âm/ từ sai (Paige -> pictures?), ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu lặp. Cần sửa phát âm, dùng từ chính xác (e.g., "pictures", "urban areas"), rút gọn câu và thêm lý do cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý (because, so) và giới hạn độ dài tối đa 5 câu.

예시: I'm more of a city person, so I prefer taking pictures in urban areas because I live in the city center and see impressive buildings every day. For instance, I enjoy photographing modern architecture and busy streets that show city life. These scenes inspire me with interesting shapes and lighting.

제안: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ. Cần sửa cấu trúc để tự nhiên hơn (e.g., "I've lived in Vietnam for 20 years"), tránh lặp từ (new place, new country) và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn (ví dụ loại phong cảnh bạn muốn khám phá). Dùng liên từ hợp lý (because, so) và tối đa 5 câu.

예시: Although I've lived in Vietnam for twenty years, I prefer visiting other countries to see different landscapes and cultures. For example, I would like to photograph coastal cliffs and alpine scenery abroad because they are quite different from what I usually see at home. Traveling abroad gives me fresh inspiration for my photography.

× I love taking picture of different views because I love, you know capturing moment especially when I go travel to new country and when I hang out with my friends going to the new restaurant with the new views.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views because I love, you know, capturing moments especially when I travel to a new country and when I hang out with my friends at a new restaurant with interesting views.

The nouns 'picture' and 'moment' should be plural ('pictures', 'moments') because the speaker refers to multiple instances. Use 'travel to' or simply 'travel' with 'when I travel to a new country' for correct verb usage. Also use the preposition 'at' for locations like 'at a new restaurant'. Suggestions: pluralize countable nouns when referring to more than one; use 'when I travel to' or 'when I travel' and 'at' for venues.

× I love to capture moments so that's why I always taking pic with my friends and the views around.

✓ I love to capture moments, so that's why I am always taking pictures with my friends and the surrounding views.

The progressive form requires auxiliary verbs: 'always taking' should be 'am always taking' to form present continuous. Also 'pic' is informal; use 'pictures'. 'The views around' is better expressed as 'the surrounding views'. Suggestions: use correct auxiliary verbs for continuous tenses and prefer full words in formal speech.

× I'm I'm kind of a city lover, so I love taking Paige in urban area because I live in the center of the city.

✓ I'm, I'm kind of a city lover, so I love taking photos in urban areas because I live in the center of the city.

'Paige' is likely a mispronunciation of 'pics' or 'photos'—use 'photos'. 'In urban area' should be plural or take an article: 'in urban areas' or 'in the urban area'. Use 'photos' for clarity. Suggestions: choose correct vocabulary and match singular/plural for nouns.

× So I have a chain to go around the city within big a huge building every day.

✓ So I have a chance to go around the city with big, huge buildings every day.

'Chain' is incorrect; the intended word is 'chance'. Word choice error like this falls under incorrect quantifiers/word choice. 'Within big a huge building' is ungrammatical; correct phrasing is 'with big, huge buildings' or simply 'among huge buildings'. Suggestions: use 'chance' when meaning opportunity and place adjectives before nouns in correct order.

× So I love going to modern architectural place and love taking picture there.

✓ So I love going to modern architectural places and love taking pictures there.

Use plural 'places' when speaking generally. 'Architectural' should modify 'places' or use 'architecture' as a noun: 'modern architectural places' or 'modern architecture'. Also pluralize 'picture' to 'pictures'. Suggestions: match prepositions and noun forms for general statements and pluralize when referring generally.

× Since I've been living here in Vietnam for 20 years, I prefer going to a new place, a new country to enjoy new views, because I know the nature is in foreign country as beautiful and I would love to go as much as possible to other country to explore all of that.

✓ Since I've been living here in Vietnam for 20 years, I prefer going to new places, new countries to enjoy new views, because I know nature in foreign countries is beautiful and I would love to visit other countries as much as possible to explore all of that.

Pluralize 'places' and 'countries' for general preference. 'The nature is in foreign country as beautiful' is incorrect word order and article use; correct to 'nature in foreign countries is beautiful'. Use 'visit' instead of 'go' when referring to traveling to countries. Suggestions: pluralize when generalizing, place adjectives correctly, and use appropriate verbs like 'visit' for traveling.