Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然、语法正确并直接回应问题。先给出主题句表明喜好，然后用一两句具体细节说明原因或举例，句子不要太多。注意时态和动词搭配（例如 “I like taking photos” 或 “I enjoy photographing different views”），避免重复和不完整短语。

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like capturing landscapes and cityscapes because they show interesting shapes and colors, and I often experiment with different angles to make the pictures more lively.

제안: 先直接回答偏好（城市或乡村），然后用一两个具体理由支持你的观点，使用衔接词（for example, because, so）使结构连贯。注意名词单复数和固定搭配（例如 “urban areas” 和 “skyscrapers”）。控制在最多五句话内。

예시: I prefer urban areas because I enjoy the dramatic architecture and busy streets. For example, I like photographing skyscrapers at sunset, as the light creates strong contrasts and interesting reflections.

제안: 先明确回答（own country / other countries），然后说明具体原因，并可给出一个期望或例子。注意语法：使用正确的时态（e.g. I have never been abroad），改正动词形式（record → record/photograph），避免重复和填充词。用连词（because, so, for example）连接句子。

예시: I would prefer to photograph views in other countries because I have never been abroad and I want to see different cultures and landscapes. For example, I would love to photograph ancient temples in Asia or colorful markets in South America to capture unique scenes.

× Yes, I very like to take photos 'cause I have a very keen on become a camera so I like the different views to in my photo.

✓ Yes, I really like taking photos because I have a strong desire to become a photographer, so I like different views in my photos.

句中 “very like to take photos” 用法不自然，應使用副詞 + 動名詞結構：really like doing sth → really like taking photos。原句 “have a very keen on become a camera” 結構錯誤，應為 have a keen desire / be keen on + 動名詞。此處意為“想成為攝影師”，應改為 “have a strong desire to become a photographer” 或 “be keen on becoming a photographer”。另外 “to in my photo” 介詞和詞序錯誤，應為 “in my photos”。建議：學習副詞修飾動詞的用法（really, very 的區別），掌握 be keen on + -ing 與 have a desire to + 不定式的正確表達，並注意介詞搭配。

× To be honest, I prefer the urban area 'cause I very like the landscape, landscapes and that huge buildings in my in front of me. So I'm I prefer in the urban area.

✓ To be honest, I prefer urban areas because I really like the landscapes and the huge buildings in front of me. So I prefer urban areas.

句中 “I very like” 英語中第三人稱或其他人稱都不能用 very like，應使用 really like。短語 “the urban area” 與後文不一致，應使用複數或泛指形式 urban areas。“that huge buildings in my in front of me” 連詞、冠詞和詞序錯誤，應為 “the huge buildings in front of me”。最後 “I'm I prefer in the urban area” 結構冗餘且介詞使用錯誤，應簡化為 “I prefer urban areas”。建議：注意副詞 really 的使用，名詞單複數一致，簡化句子避免冗餘，並學習常見固定搭配 like + noun(s) / like + -ing。

× I prefer to the other countries 'cause I'm never go abroad. So if I have a chance, I, I, I, I very hope to go abroad and to records the foreigner countries, but uh, to record the foreign landscapes.

✓ I prefer other countries because I have never gone abroad. So if I have a chance, I really hope to go abroad and record foreign countries and landscapes.

“prefer to the other countries” 介詞誤用，應為 prefer other countries 或 prefer going to other countries。“I'm never go abroad” 時態和助動詞用法錯誤，應為 have never gone abroad（現在完成時）表示至今未去過。 “I very hope” 副詞位置和選詞錯誤，應為 really hope。 “to records” 動詞形式錯誤，應為 record（不加 s，與不定式 to 或原形動詞一起時）。“foreigner countries” 形容詞用錯，應為 foreign countries。建議：學習常見動詞 prefer 的搭配，掌握現在完成時 have/has + past participle，注意動詞不定式與原形，區分 foreign / foreigner 的用法。