Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 発音と流暢さを改善し、繰り返しや文法の誤りを減らす必要があります。具体的には：1) 冗長な「I」「because」を避ける。2) 過去・現在形や不定詞の基本を正しく使う（例: "I'm good at taking photos"）。3) 1文目で簡潔に答え、2〜3文で理由や具体例を述べる練習をする。模範表現を声に出して繰り返し、録音して自己修正すると効果的です。

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I’m good at composing shots, and my country has many beautiful places, so I often go out to capture landscapes and city scenes.

제안: 応答を明確にし、意味のある理由をつなげる練習が必要です。具体的には：1) 主語と動詞の一致を確認する（"I like taking photos in urban areas"）。2) 理由を一文でまとめ、接続詞（because, so）を正しく使う。3) 混乱した語や不要なフレーズを省く。街での撮影理由（光、建築、人の表情など）を具体的に挙げる練習をしましょう。

예시: I prefer taking photos in urban areas because cities offer interesting architecture and lively street scenes, which give me more opportunities to capture dynamic compositions.

제안: 複数の理由を明確かつ簡潔に述べる練習が必要です。具体的には：1) 口語的な "wanna" は避け、正式な表現（"I prefer"）を使う。2) 同じ理由を繰り返さない（"I can't speak" を2回言わない）。3) 理由を2つまでに絞り、接続詞でつなげる（"because", "and"）。また、語彙を広げて「言語の壁」を別の言い方で表現すると良いです。

예시: I prefer taking photos in my own country because traveling abroad is expensive for me, and I also feel more comfortable photographing where I know the language and culture.

× Yes, I like to take a photo because I I, I'm good at take photo ski so because. My home country has a lot of good place so.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos because I am good at taking photos. My home country has a lot of good places.

The student used infinitive and incorrect bare verb forms where the -ing form is required after 'like' and 'good at'. Use 'like taking' instead of 'like to take' for general preference (both are acceptable but 'taking photos' is more natural), and 'good at taking photos'. Also pluralize countable nouns: 'photos' and 'places'. Remove filler words and repetition. Suggestions: Use verb+ -ing after 'good at' and consider plural forms for countable nouns.

× I like to take a photo in urban area.

✓ I like to take photos in urban areas.

Use plural 'areas' when speaking generally about types of places. Also 'in urban areas' is the correct prepositional phrase for location. Use 'photos' plural for general activity. Suggestions: Use plural nouns for general statements and 'in' with 'areas'.

× This is because I can't get are you. I'm my home country, my hometown is our area, so I have to go to.

✓ This is because I can't get them in my home country. My hometown is a rural area, so I have to travel to the city to take photos.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Can't get are you' is incoherent; likely intended meaning is 'can't get them' (photos of urban views) or 'can't get there'. Clarify by specifying the object and correct noun phrase: 'rural area'. Use a complete clause 'so I have to travel to the city'. Suggestions: Form complete sentences with clear subjects and verbs; avoid unclear pronouns.

× I wanna take a photo in my country because I can't go to the other countries because I don't have much money so and more I can't speak other country languages.

✓ I want to take photos in my own country because I can't go to other countries; I don't have much money and I can't speak foreign languages.

Use proper modal/auxiliary and formal contraction: 'want to' instead of 'wanna'. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'other countries'. 'Other country languages' is incorrect; use 'foreign languages' or 'other countries' languages' but 'foreign languages' is natural. Combine clauses with appropriate punctuation. Suggestions: Use 'want to' in speaking tests, avoid contractions like 'wanna', and use 'foreign languages' for clarity.

× I can't speak, I can't speak English.

✓ I can't speak English.

Redundant repetition 'I can't speak' repeated twice; drop duplication. Ensure sentence is concise and directly connected to previous clause if needed. Suggestions: Avoid repeating identical clauses; keep answers concise.