Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Работайте над плавностью и точностью выражений. Уберите заполнители (uh), исправьте грамматику (например, «I always take pictures», «views help me relax when I look at them») и стройте ответ из 2–3 предложений: тема + одна причина/пример. Добавьте связку для естественности (because, so, when).

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I always take photos when I travel because looking at them later helps me relax and remember the places I visited.

제안: Сократите повторы и улучшите грамматику и порядок слов. Уберите «uh», используйте связку (because, and) и дайте конкретные примеры (e.g., city skyline, tree-lined streets). Сформулируйте 1–2 предложений: тема + 1–2 конкретных причин.

예시: I prefer views in urban areas because the city skyline and tree-lined streets are visually interesting. For example, sunsets behind tall buildings can create dramatic colours you don't usually see in the countryside.

제안: Работайте над связностью и грамматикой: используйте корректные фразы («to be honest», «I prefer views in other countries because many coasts have beautiful sunsets over the sea»). Объединяйте мысли в 2–3 предложениях, дайте конкретный пример или сравнение.

예시: To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because coastal regions abroad often offer beautiful sunsets over the sea. For instance, watching the sun set on a foreign beach creates a memorable atmosphere that I don't always find at home.

× when I travel I always pictures different views because views can help me relax when I see my pictures.

✓ when I travel I always take pictures of different views because views can help me relax when I look at my pictures.

The student used 'pictures' as a verb; the correct verb phrase is 'take pictures'. Use 'look at' rather than 'see' for viewing your own photos. Also maintain simple present tense 'I always take' for habitual action. Suggestion: learn common collocations like 'take pictures' and use 'look at' for examining images.

× Of thought.

✓ (remove 'Of thought') or 'I think so.'

This fragment 'Of thought' is not a grammatical English phrase. It appears intended to mean 'I thought' or 'I think so.' Replace with 'I think so' for present opinion or remove entirely. Suggestion: avoid literal translations; use complete clauses with subject and verb.

× I prefer always, uh, views in urban areas because in urban areas, uh, more beautiful sunset and also very interesting streets with trees, these landscapes.

✓ I always prefer views in urban areas because urban areas often have more beautiful sunsets and very interesting tree-lined streets and landscapes.

Errors include word order 'prefer always' (place adverb before main verb 'prefer' as 'always prefer'), missing verb 'are' or quantifier 'more' with plural 'sunsets', and awkward noun grouping. Use 'more beautiful sunsets' and 'tree-lined streets' or 'streets with trees'. Suggestion: place adverbs correctly and ensure plural agreement when comparing.

× because in urban areas, uh, more beautiful sunset and also very interesting streets with trees, these landscapes.

✓ because in urban areas there are more beautiful sunsets and also very interesting streets with trees and landscapes.

The sentence lacked the existential 'there are' to introduce plural nouns. Use 'there are more beautiful sunsets' to indicate existence/quantity. Suggestion: use 'there is/there are' for stating presence of things.

× to be honestly, I prefer views in other countries because in all countries not different. Beautiful sunsets. I very love sunset. With sea or an ocean.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because countries are different. I really love sunsets by the sea or the ocean.

Multiple issues: 'to be honestly' should be 'to be honest' (idiomatic phrase). 'in all countries not different' is incorrect word order and negation; better 'countries are different' or 'not all countries are the same'. 'I very love sunset' is incorrect adverb placement and collocation; use 'I really love sunsets'. 'With sea or an ocean' should be 'by the sea or the ocean' or 'with the sea or the ocean'. Suggestion: learn fixed expressions ('to be honest'), place adverbs like 'really' before the main verb, and use correct prepositions 'by' or 'at' with 'sea/ocean'.

× Beautiful sunsets.

✓ Beautiful sunsets.

Alone this fragment is a sentence fragment lacking a verb; however the noun's singular/plural form 'sunsets' is correct when referring generally. Ensure it is used within a complete sentence, e.g., 'There are beautiful sunsets.' Suggestion: combine noun phrases with verbs to form full sentences.