Views— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
수험생
Absolutely. I love capturing beautiful scenery when I travel because photos help me preserve special memories and share experiences with friends. Photography is a relaxing hobby for me, and I often try different compositions and lighting to capture the atmosphere of a place.
시험관
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
수험생
I definitely prefer views. There's something about the city skyline at night with all the lights and interesting architecture that I find really exciting. I also enjoy rooftop views on the city parks because they show a different side of city life.
시험관
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
수험생
Personally, I prefer the views in my own country because I feel more connected to the scenery here. There are so many breathtaking places I haven't explored yet and local views often remind me of my childhood. And cheaper to travel around my own country.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
점수: 86.0제안: 回答自然且信息充足，但可更直接回应问题首句并稍微精简以符合最大句数限制（不超过5句）。此外可以加入具体例子或一次拍摄经历来增加细节，使回答更具说服力。注意使用连接词使句子更连贯，例如“for example”或“for instance”。
예시: Yes, I do. I love photographing scenery when I travel because pictures help me preserve memories and share them with friends. For example, last summer I captured sunrise over a mountain, experimenting with different compositions and lighting to highlight the mist and colors, which created a real sense of atmosphere.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
점수: 78.0제안: 回答不够直接——开头应说明是偏好城市还是乡村（直接回答“urban areas”或“rural areas”）。还应避免模糊表述并提供更具体的例子或比较，如说明为什么城市夜景比乡村更吸引你。可以使用连接词如“because”或“on the other hand”来组织对比句。
예시: I prefer urban views because the city skyline at night, with its lights and varied architecture, feels more exciting to me. For instance, I love watching the illuminated skyscrapers from a rooftop park, where the contrast between green space and bright buildings creates a unique atmosphere.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
점수: 72.0제안: 内容有情感和原因，但表达稍显口语化和不够连贯。应在首句明确回答并把原因分条说明，避免碎片化句子（如“And cheaper to travel around my own country.”应改为完整句）。可以补充具体地点或回忆以增强细节，并使用连接词如“because”或“also”。
예시: I prefer views in my own country because I feel a stronger personal connection to the landscape and many places evoke childhood memories. Also, there are still many breathtaking spots I haven’t explored yet, and traveling locally is more affordable, which lets me visit more destinations.
문법
× And cheaper to travel around my own country.
✓ And it's cheaper to travel around my own country.
原句缺少谓语动词（系动词）和冠词结构，使句子不完整。应加上系动词“is”构成完整句子“it is cheaper...”。在口语中常缩写为“it's”。建议在省略主语时不要省略系动词，保持句子完整。
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