Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và ngôn ngữ tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'destination are all somewhere' sai cấu trúc) và lặp ý. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể về sở thích (thứ bạn thích chụp, ví dụ cụ thể) và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

예시: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel I often photograph beaches and mountain landscapes because I enjoy capturing wide open spaces and dramatic light.

제안: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng nên ngắn gọn hơn và sửa một vài lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ 'it has many green trees' -> 'they have many trees' hoặc 'rural areas have many trees'). Bổ sung 1-2 lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer rural views because they have lots of greenery and open space, which makes me feel relaxed. For instance, I enjoy walking in the countryside and photographing fields and forests.

제안: Ý rất rõ ràng nhưng cần chỉnh ngữ pháp và chọn từ chính xác ('destination' -> 'destinations', 'that make me proud' có thể nêu ví dụ cụ thể). Thêm một lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ cảm xúc của bạn và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful destinations and breathtaking scenery that make me proud. For example, I love photographing our coastal cliffs and national parks when I travel around the country.

× Oh yes, I really like taking pictures especially when I travel to beautiful destination are all somewhere with fantastic view like beach or mountains.

✓ Oh yes, I really like taking pictures, especially when I travel to beautiful destinations or somewhere with fantastic views like beaches or mountains.

The original sentence has multiple structure problems: missing commas, incorrect singular/plural forms (destination -> destinations, view -> views, beach -> beaches), and an erroneous phrase 'are all somewhere' that breaks sentence flow. Suggestion: add a comma after 'pictures', use plural nouns for general references, and replace 'are all somewhere' with 'or somewhere' to make the list parallel and grammatically correct.

× I prefer views in rural areas more because it has many green trees and it brings a sense of comfort.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas more because they have many green trees and bring a sense of comfort.

The subject 'views' is plural, so verbs referring to it should be plural: use 'they have' instead of 'it has' and 'bring' instead of 'it brings'. Also 'more' after 'prefer' is redundant but acceptable; could omit 'more' for conciseness.

× I prefer views in my own country because there are many attractive destination and breathtaking scenery that make me proud of my homeland.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because there are many attractive destinations and breathtaking scenes that make me proud of my homeland.

'Destination' should be plural 'destinations' to match 'many'. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun; to refer to multiple distinct sights use 'scenes' or keep 'scenery' without plural marker. Also ensure plural verb agreement: 'that make' is correct for plural antecedents.