Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes or no + brief reason), add one or two specific supporting details using linking words, and keep it under five sentences. For example, say whether you enjoy taking photos, explain what kinds of views you like, and give a brief reason or example.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember places I visit. For example, I like photographing city skylines at sunset and quiet country fields in the morning; these scenes have different colours and moods. Also, when I review the photos later, I can recall details I might otherwise forget.

제안: Again, you repeated the question rather than answering. Improve by stating your preference in the first sentence, then support it with specific reasons and one example, using linking words to connect ideas. Keep your answer natural and concise (no more than five sentences).

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy open spaces and natural scenery. For instance, I like wide green fields and lakes where I can relax and take landscape photos; in contrast, urban views can feel crowded and noisy. However, I sometimes appreciate city rooftops at night for their bright lights and architecture.

제안: You repeated the examiner's words instead of giving an answer. To improve, state your preference clearly, then explain why with specific details or a brief example. Use linking words (for example, however, because) to make the answer coherent, and stay within five sentences.

예시: I usually prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures to discover. For example, I remember being amazed by mountain villages abroad that had architecture and colours unlike anything at home. Nevertheless, I also appreciate familiar scenes in my own country because they feel comforting and easy to revisit.

× Do you prefer views in urban area or rural area?

✓ Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

The student omitted plural forms and articles that are needed to talk about general types of places. When speaking about categories like 'urban areas' and 'rural areas', use the plural form without an article to refer generally to those kinds of places. Suggestion: use 'urban areas' and 'rural areas' for general preference questions.

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in other country?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

The phrase 'other country' is incorrect for contrasting 'your own country' in a general sense. Use the plural 'other countries' to refer to countries different from your own. Also keep 'your own country' singular because it refers to the listener's specific country. Suggestion: use 'other countries' when speaking generally about multiple foreign countries.

× Do you like taking pictures of different views?

✓ Do you like taking pictures of different views?

This sentence is correct. No article or plural error is present. It properly uses 'different views' to refer generally to various kinds of views.

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in other country?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Duplicate of earlier sentence: the error is using singular 'other country' when referring generally to non-native countries. Use plural 'other countries' to ask about preferences across multiple foreign countries. Suggestion: keep 'your own country' singular and contrast with 'other countries'.