Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and avoid repetition. Add one specific detail (what you photograph or a favorite photo) and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep to a maximum of about 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because I like to capture memories of places I visit. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and local markets, so in the future I can show my child what those places looked like. Therefore, I usually take many pictures whenever I travel.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then provide specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases and repeated words. Use plural/singular forms correctly and simple linking words like 'because' and 'however'. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more scenic. For example, rural areas offer wide landscapes and clear sightlines, whereas cities often have traffic and tall buildings that block the view. Therefore, I enjoy photographing nature and long vistas in the countryside.

제안: Answer directly and avoid repeating 'personally'. Use correct tense and articles, and provide one or two specific examples (a mountain or beach you like). Use linking words to connect ideas and keep the response concise (3–4 sentences).

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I have only traveled domestically and it offers diverse landscapes like mountains and beaches. In particular, I love mountain scenery because of the hiking trails, waterfalls, and panoramic viewpoints. That's why mountains are my favorite places to visit and photograph.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures different views because I like to capture the memory of the places.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I like to capture the memories of places.

The verb after 'like' should be the -ing form when expressing a general preference (Grammar ID 8). Remove 'to' before 'taking'. Also add the preposition 'of' after 'pictures' (preposition error but handled as part of the correction) and pluralize 'memory' to 'memories' for naturalness.

× So in the future to my child I show the pictures of the moment I captured.

✓ So in the future I will show my child the pictures of the moments I captured.

This sentence describes a future intention, so use the future tense 'will show' (Grammar ID 7). The original word order is incorrect; place the indirect object 'my child' after the verb or use 'to' correctly: 'show my child' is natural. Also pluralize 'moment' to 'moments' to match 'pictures'.

× So usually I take a lot of pictures whenever I am travel.

✓ So usually I take a lot of pictures whenever I travel.

After 'whenever' use the base form for habitual present actions: 'whenever I travel' (Grammar ID 6). The original 'I am travel' incorrectly mixes the progressive auxiliary with a base verb.

× From my perspective, I like the views in the rural areas because in the urban areas there are a lot of vehicles, a lot of tall buildings, so you don't clear, you don't see a clearview of the area.

✓ From my perspective, I like views in rural areas because in urban areas there are many vehicles and tall buildings, so you don't see a clear view of the area.

Remove unnecessary definite articles 'the' before plural general nouns (Grammar ID 22). Use 'many' with countable plural nouns instead of 'a lot of' for conciseness (Grammar ID 14). 'Clearview' should be two words 'clear view' and the sentence 'you don't clear' is ungrammatical; use 'you don't see a clear view'.

× But on the other hand, in the rural area the view are the so good, you see a long view and the beauty of the nature was good.

✓ But on the other hand, in rural areas the views are so good; you can see long distances and the beauty of nature.

Subject 'views' is plural so verb must be 'are' (Grammar ID 27). Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'rural area' and adjust noun phrases: 'so good' is fine but restructure for clarity. Use 'can see long distances' instead of 'you see a long view' and 'the beauty of nature' without 'was' to keep present-tense general statement (Grammar ID 6).

× Personally, I traveled only in my country so I like views in my own country because my country have a lot of different type of places like mountain beaches, plain areas.

✓ Personally, I have traveled only within my country, so I like the views there because my country has many different types of places, like mountains, beaches, and plains.

Use present perfect 'have traveled' for life experience up to now (Grammar ID 5) and 'within my country' is more natural. Subject 'my country' is singular so use 'has' (Grammar ID 27). Use 'many different types' for quantifier and pluralize listed place types correctly.

× So personally I like to go into the mountains because mountain contains a lot of beauty in it and there are a lot of places we went in the mountains.

✓ So personally I like to go to the mountains because mountains contain a lot of beauty and there are many places we have visited in the mountains.

Use 'go to the mountains' rather than 'go into' for common collocation (Grammar ID 11). Use plural 'mountains contain' to agree with subject (Grammar ID 27). Replace 'a lot of' with 'many' for countable 'places' (Grammar ID 14). Use present perfect 'have visited' for experiences relevant to the present (Grammar ID 5).