Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly with your own opinion in a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details. Use natural phrasing and correct pronouns. Keep it under five sentences. For example, say whether you enjoy it, why, and give a short example or frequency.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember places and notice small details. For instance, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and quiet countryside fields in the morning because the light makes the scenes more interesting.

제안: Respond directly naming which you prefer, then give specific reasons and a brief comparison using linking words (for example, 'because' or 'while'). Avoid repeating the examiner's words; produce your own complete sentences and keep it concise.

예시: I prefer rural views because the scenery is usually more peaceful and natural, while urban views can feel busy and noisy. For example, I like photographing green fields and forests because they relax me, whereas city photos often focus on architecture and lights.

제안: State your preference clearly (own country or other countries), then explain with specific reasons or an example. Use linking words like 'however' or 'also' if comparing. Make sentences natural and avoid copying the examiner's phrasing.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering different landscapes and cultures, although I also appreciate familiar places at home. For instance, traveling abroad lets me photograph unique architecture and coastal scenery that I don't see in my country.

× Do you like taking pictures of different views?

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The student's response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a pragmatic/pronoun use issue because the expected reply should use a pronoun and verb to state personal preference. Suggestion: Answer directly using a subject pronoun (I) and a verb (like/like to), for example 'Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.'

× Do you prefer views in other areas or rural areas?

✓ Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

The student replaced 'urban areas' with 'other areas', which changes meaning and misuses the pronoun/adjective pair. The examiner asked specifically 'urban areas'; the correct contrast is 'urban areas or rural areas.' Suggestion: Repeat or mirror key vocabulary from the question when clarifying: use 'urban areas' instead of 'other areas.'

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in the other country?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Using 'the other country' is incorrect here because the examiner contrasted 'your own country' with 'other countries' in general, not one specific country. This is an article/determiner error. Use 'other countries' (no article) to refer to countries besides your own. Suggestion: Use plural 'other countries' when comparing your country with countries in general; avoid 'the' unless a specific single country has been previously mentioned.