Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Відповідь доброзичлива та зрозуміла, але варто зробити її більш природною та компактною: сформулюйте тему речення чіткіше, скоротіть повтори (наприклад, «take a photo of this moment» і «use it like a memory» перекриваються) і додайте короткий приклад. Також уникайте зайвих наповнювачів і перевірте порядок слів для плавності.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of views because it relaxes me and helps me capture special moments. For example, when I visit a park I often photograph the sunset so I can remember the atmosphere later.

제안: Відповідь показує ідею, але є кілька проблем: невпевненість через фрази «to be honest» і «probably», граматичні помилки (наприклад, «in a mood» → «in the mood», «wanna» неформально) і незрозумілий вираз «landscapes in the room». Потрібно чітко заявити перевагу або сказати, що залежить, і привести конкретні приклади з плавними зв'язками.

예시: It depends on my mood. If I want energy and architecture I prefer urban views, like skyscrapers in the city centre; but when I need peace I choose rural landscapes such as rolling hills or lakes.

제안: Добра ідея вказати, що краса універсальна, але фраза «type of country you are» некоректна, а також повторюється «view and the landscapes». Замість цього сформулюйте чіткіше: скажіть, що ви цінуєте як місцеві, так і закордонні види, і надайте короткий приклад або причину вашої переваги.

예시: I believe beautiful views can be found anywhere, but I especially like the countryside in my home country because the rolling fields and traditional villages feel familiar and peaceful.

× For sure, yes, taking pictures is some kind of relaxation for me.

✓ For sure, yes, taking pictures is a kind of relaxation for me.

The phrase 'some kind of' is grammatically acceptable but 'a kind of' is more natural and idiomatic here; also no verb form error but minor wording improvement to sound native. Suggest using 'a kind of' when categorizing nouns.

× I really like that I can combine the real moment and also to take a photo of this moment and then use it like a memory and maybe some time later.

✓ I really like that I can capture the real moment by taking a photo and then use it as a memory later.

Original mixes infinitive 'to take' with base verb 'combine' and redundant connectors. Use parallel structure: 'capture... by taking' or 'combine... and take' but maintain consistent verb forms. Also replace 'use it like a memory' with 'use it as a memory' for correct preposition.

× Sometimes I would probably say that I'm really in a mood to go to the city and to see a really great view of the high buildings.

✓ Sometimes I would probably say that I'm really in the mood to go to the city and see a great view of the tall buildings.

Use idiomatic phrase 'in the mood' (requires the definite article 'the'). Remove unnecessary 'to' before second verb to keep parallel infinitive structure when 'to' is optional after 'go to the city and see'. Use 'tall buildings' which is more natural than 'high buildings'.

× Sometimes I wanna see landscapes in the room.

✓ Sometimes I want to see landscapes in the countryside.

'Wanna' is informal; use 'want to'. The phrase 'landscapes in the room' is illogical — it likely intended 'in the countryside' or 'in the countryside/field'. Replace pronoun/phrase to make meaning clear.

× To be honest, I think the beauty doesn't depend on the type of country you are, so that is why I would say that, for instance, I really like the countryside, the view and the landscapes in my home country.

✓ To be honest, I think beauty doesn't depend on what country you are in, so I would say, for instance, that I really like the countryside and landscapes in my home country.

Incorrect pronoun phrase 'the type of country you are' — use 'what country you are in' to indicate location. Remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'beauty' for natural expression. Use parallel nouns 'countryside and landscapes' connected with 'and'.