Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct verb forms (I like taking), articles (the/a), and clearer nouns. Keep answer concise (1-3 sentences) and add one specific detail about why you like those views using a linking word (because/so).

예시: I like taking pictures of sea and mountain views because the natural light and colors make photos look beautiful. For example, the sunset over the sea creates warm reflections that are great for photography.

제안: Focus on a clear, single reason and correct grammar. State your preference directly, then give one specific, coherent reason using linking words (because/so). Avoid unrelated or unclear phrases about pollution—express it simply.

예시: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and have cleaner air, which makes landscapes look fresher. For instance, fewer cars and more trees mean clearer skies that photograph well.

제안: Provide a direct, grammatical response and a clear reason. Use correct vocabulary (country, not candy) and explain why familiarity matters, with one supporting detail. Keep it short and specific.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best locations and feel more comfortable there. For example, I can visit familiar coastal spots at the best times for photography.

× I like take picture on sea view and uh Mountain View because have a slight and natural food for photo is look like it's good.

✓ I like taking pictures of the sea view and the mountain view because they have a soft, natural look that is good for photos.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund 'taking' not the base form 'take' (Grammar type 8). 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match liking taking multiple photos (singular/plural). Prepositions: use 'of' for 'pictures of the sea view' and 'the' before specific views (article errors). Also reorganized the sentence for clarity and to use plural agreement 'they have' for the views. Suggested improvement: after verbs like 'like', use the -ing form; check noun plurality and use appropriate prepositions and articles.

× In my opinion I prefer E rural areas because it's don't help us carbon dioxide of car and town is don't have a neutral anti it's for the photo it's good.

✓ In my opinion I prefer rural areas because they help reduce car carbon dioxide, and towns do not have the natural settings that are good for photos.

Multiple errors combined: unnecessary letter 'E' removed. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'rural areas' (subject-verb agreement). 'It's don't' is ungrammatical; use 'they help reduce' or 'they do not produce' for meaning (verb form and subject-verb agreement). 'Carbon dioxide of car' should be 'car carbon dioxide' or 'carbon dioxide from cars' (preposition and word order). 'Town is don't have' becomes 'towns do not have' (article/pronoun and verb form). Also 'natural' instead of 'neutral anti'. Suggested improvement: ensure subjects and verbs agree, avoid contractions like 'it's don't', and use correct noun phrases for emissions.

× I prefer my own candy because I have a see this view but in eyeshadow.

✓ I prefer my own country because I have seen this view before, but in other countries the views are different.

'Candy' is a wrong word; corrected to 'country' (word choice). 'I have a see' mixes present perfect with base verb; use past participle 'seen' after 'have' (verb in past participle form - type 9). 'In eyeshadow' is meaningless here; interpreted as 'in other countries' or 'in other places'. Also clarified contrast with other countries. Suggested improvement: use correct vocabulary, use 'have seen' for present perfect, and ensure the second clause clearly contrasts.