Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais contient des erreurs grammaticales et de formulation. Concrètement : utilisez la forme correcte du verbe (I like taking pictures), accordez le nombre (pictures), et précisez le type de vues pour enrichir la réponse. Limitez-vous à 2–4 phrases maximum et utilisez un mot de liaison si vous ajoutez une raison ou un exemple.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and mountain landscapes because I like capturing contrasts in light and texture.

제안: La phrase n'est pas claire et contient des erreurs de temps et de personne. Répondez directement (urban or rural), utilisez le présent simple pour les préférences (I prefer) et ajoutez une raison brève avec un mot de liaison (because / as) pour être plus naturel.

예시: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I find the countryside more peaceful and photogenic, and I like the natural scenery and open spaces.

제안: Erreur sur la forme verbale et le choix de mots (reviews → views, other country → other countries). Utilisez le présent simple (I prefer) et soyez précis (why you prefer them) avec une courte justification. Restez dans 1–3 phrases et employez une conjonction pour relier la préférence à la raison.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and landscapes that I don't see at home, and travelling gives me the chance to discover new scenery.

× Yes, I like take picture in different view.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'taking' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). Also use plural 'pictures' and 'views' for general activities (Singular and plural issue, ID 1) and the preposition 'of' after 'pictures' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' for habits or preferences, ensure nouns are plural when speaking generally, and use 'of' to indicate what the pictures are of.

× No, I didn't prefer you in urban.

✓ No, I don't prefer urban areas.

The original uses past negative 'didn't prefer' which is incorrect for a current preference; use simple present 'don't prefer' for habits/preferences (Present tense issue, ID 6). 'Prefer' with 'you' is incorrect in context; the question asks about areas so 'urban areas' is needed (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12 and Singular/plural, ID 1). Suggestion: use 'I don't prefer urban areas' or 'I prefer rural areas' depending on intended meaning.

× I'm prefer reviews in other country.

✓ I prefer views in other countries.

The present progressive 'I'm prefer' is incorrect; use simple present 'I prefer' for preferences (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). 'Reviews' is the wrong word; use 'views' for scenery (Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns, ID 13). Also use plural 'countries' when speaking generally unless a specific country is meant (Singular and plural issue, ID 1) and include the plural or an article: 'other countries' or 'another country'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer views in other countries'.