Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and sentence structure, be concise, and add specific details. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct verb forms and articles, and give one or two concrete examples using linking words (for example, when/so/because).

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because they capture unique moments. For example, when I see dramatic cloudy skies above tall buildings, I like to take wide-angle shots to show the contrast between the clouds and the skyline.

제안: Answer directly which you prefer or say you like both, then give clear, specific reasons and examples. Use correct tenses and linking words (for example, however, because, for instance) and avoid mixing unrelated details. Keep to 2–4 sentences maximum.

예시: I like both urban and rural views for different reasons. For instance, I enjoy rural landscapes because of the open fields and rows of crops, which are peaceful, while I prefer urban views for the dramatic skyline and modern architecture.

제안: Clarify your meaning and correct grammar. State your preference clearly, then explain why with specific details and linking words. Avoid repetition and vague phrases. Mention an example of a place in your country to make the answer concrete.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I cannot travel abroad frequently. For example, I often visit nearby forests and hills where I can photograph dense trees and wildlife, which I find more familiar and accessible.

× Absolutely, I like to taking picture of different views.

✓ Absolutely, I like to take pictures of different views.

The verb after 'like to' should be the base form (take), not the -ing form; also 'picture' should be plural ('pictures') to match general preference. Suggestion: use 'like to take' or 'like taking' and match noun number ('pictures').

× When I see the cloudy, cloudy views with a big buildings and I want to take the picture and get some moments.

✓ When I see cloudy views with big buildings, I want to take pictures and capture moments.

Multiple article and noun-number errors: 'the cloudy, cloudy views' is repetitive and unnecessary; 'a big buildings' mixes singular article with plural noun — use no article with plural 'big buildings' or 'a big building' if singular. 'the picture' should be plural/general 'pictures'. 'Get some moments' is unnatural; use 'capture moments'. Suggestion: remove redundant words, match articles to noun number, and use natural verbs ('take pictures', 'capture moments').

× Yes, I prefer both views.

✓ Yes, I like both kinds of views.

'Prefer both views' is awkward because 'prefer' normally compares; if you like both, say 'I like both kinds of views' or if comparing, specify preference. Suggestion: use 'like' for enjoying both or 'I prefer both equally' to express equal preference.

× Sometime I prefer urban areas which I saw big trees, crops and farm lands and sometime I prefer to see cities view where I see the big buildings and.

✓ Sometimes I prefer rural areas with big trees, crops, and farmlands, and sometimes I prefer city views where I see large buildings.

Multiple issues: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (adverb of frequency). 'Prefer urban areas which I saw' mixes past tense 'saw' incorrectly; use present simple 'have' or 'with' to describe features. 'Farm lands' should be 'farmlands' or 'farms'. 'cities view' should be 'city views'. Also remove trailing conjunction. Suggestion: use 'Sometimes I prefer... and sometimes I prefer...' and correct noun forms and prepositions ('with').

× Actually I'm cannot visit other country to so I prefer I prefer a view which is in my country to see.

✓ Actually I cannot visit other countries, so I prefer views in my own country.

'I'm cannot' wrongly combines contraction 'I'm' with 'cannot'; use 'I cannot' or 'I'm not able to'. 'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' or 'another country'. 'to so I prefer I prefer' repeats and misorders words; simplify to 'so I prefer'. 'a view which is in my country to see' is awkward — use 'views in my own country'. Suggestion: avoid double contractions, match singular/plural, and use concise phrasing.

× I see a more views.

✓ I see more views.

'A more views' incorrectly combines singular article 'a' with plural 'views'. Remove 'a' to say 'more views'. Suggestion: ensure articles match noun number ('a' with singular nouns only).

× Sometimes I see there are lot of trees and jungles.

✓ Sometimes I see that there are a lot of trees and forests.

'There are lot of trees' is missing the article 'a' before 'lot'. 'Jungles' is technically correct but 'forests' is more natural here. Also include 'that' after 'see' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'a lot of' and choose appropriate noun ('forests').