Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer communicates the idea but has several issues: grammatical errors ("a photos", "in single view"), slight awkwardness, and could be more concise and natural. Aim to start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and one brief supporting reason with a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I usually prefer taking just one photo of a scene. I do this because I want to capture the moment quickly and then relax and enjoy the scenery and my food without spending too much time taking pictures.

제안: This is a strong, clear answer with good vocabulary and relevant supporting details. To improve further, add a linking word for cohesion and make one concise final sentence tying back to your preference. Avoid overly long sentences to stay within the 5-sentence limit.

예시: I prefer urban views because I'm passionate about architecture and different building designs. For example, cityscapes and skylines are fascinating since they combine historical and modern styles and reveal how people live and work.

제안: The idea is good but there are language mistakes ("I proof of views" is incorrect) and some redundancy. Start with a clear statement of preference, use correct verbs, and include one specific example with a linking phrase like "for instance" or "for example." Keep it concise and directly linked to the preference.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me experience different city atmospheres and cultures. For instance, walking through the old streets of Rome showed me customs and architecture that are very different from my country, so I enjoy comparing them.

× 'No, I prefer taking a photos in single view because I want to take a photo very quickly and then enjoy the scenery and the food by myself.'

✓ 'No, I prefer taking photos of a single view because I want to take a photo very quickly and then enjoy the scenery and the food by myself.'

'a photos' is incorrect because 'photos' is plural and cannot take the singular article 'a'; use no article or 'the' with plural nouns. Also 'in single view' is unnatural; the correct preposition is 'of' and include the indefinite article 'a' before 'single view' to mean one view.'

× 'I proof of views in other countries because visiting them lets me feel the atmosphere and experience different cultures of the cities.'

✓ 'I prefer views in other countries because visiting them lets me feel the atmosphere and experience different city cultures.'

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