Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答题要更自然并且结构清晰。先给出直接回答（是/否及简短原因），然后用一到两句补充具体细节或例子。注意语法（例如动词不定式和冠词），避免重复词汇和口头语（如“uh”）。可以把“pretend to taking pictures”改为更自然的表达如“like to take photos”或“pretend to take photos”并删去多余的词。

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views because they broaden my horizons and capture special moments. For example, during sunset I often take pictures to remember the colours and atmosphere.

제안: 回答要注意主谓一致和更自然的连接词。开头直接回答偏好，然后给出两到三个具体理由并用连接词（such as, for example, moreover）使表述连贯。避免重复表达（如“relaxed and refreshed”可以合并）。

예시: I prefer rural views because the landscapes are beautiful and the air is fresher than in cities. For example, I enjoy walking in the mountains, which helps me relax and recharge after a busy week.

제안: 注意单复数和固定搭配（‘other countries’而非‘other country’）。回答要完整，避免句子中断。提供具体原因并描述感受时使用完整句子和合适时态。可以举例说明为什么某地特别吸引你，并描述感受或期待。

예시: I prefer views in other countries, especially Iceland, because of its unique natural scenery. For instance, the northern lights there are spectacular; when they shimmer across the sky I feel awe and a deep sense of wonder.

× Of course, different views will broaden your horizon and it's actually a golden hour for you to to capture, so I'd pretend to taking pictures to record this beautiful moment and just, uh, serve as a memory. Memories.

✓ Of course, different views will broaden your horizons and it's actually a golden hour for you to capture, so I'd pretend to take pictures to record this beautiful moment and just serve as a memory.

错误类型：动词 + -ing 形式 说明：原句中 “to to capture” 有重复的 to，应为不定式 “to capture”；“pretend to taking pictures” 中动词 “pretend” 后应接不定式 (pretend to do)，而不是动名词，因此应改为 “pretend to take pictures”。此外将 “horizon” 改为复数 “horizons” 更常用。建议：记住某些动词（如 pretend, want, decide, hope 等）后面接不定式 (to + 动词原形)，不要使用动词的 -ing 形式；检查是否有多余的 to。

× I prefer the views in rural areas because rural areas has beautiful landscape and fresh air, which makes me always feel relaxed and refreshed.

✓ I prefer the views in rural areas because rural areas have beautiful landscapes and fresh air, which always make me feel relaxed and refreshed.

错误类型：单复数问题 说明：原句中主语 “rural areas” 为复数，谓语动词却用单数 “has”，应使用复数动词 “have”；名词 “landscape” 在此语境中应为复数 “landscapes”；关系代词从句中的谓语要与先行词复数一致，故用 “make” 而不是 “makes”。建议：复数主语要配复数谓语，表示多样性的名词通常用复数形式。

× I prefer views in other country, especially Iceland.

✓ I prefer views in other countries, especially Iceland.

错误类型：单复数问题 说明：短语 “other country” 前的其他国家通常指复数，应为 “other countries”。建议：当表示“其他国家”这一类泛指时使用复数形式。

× Iceland is well known for its polar light and polar scenic views.

✓ Iceland is well known for its polar lights and spectacular scenery.

错误类型：句子结构错误 说明：原句中 “polar light” 和 “polar scenic views” 用词重复且搭配不自然；应使用常见搭配 “polar lights” 或 “the Northern Lights”，以及更自然的 “scenery” 而非 “scenic views”。建议：使用习惯搭配（如 the Northern Lights, scenery, landscape 等），避免重复修饰词。

× When the polar light stunning and shimmer in our eyes, I will always feel.

✓ When the polar lights are stunning and shimmering before our eyes, I always feel moved.

错误类型：现在时态问题 说明：原句缺少系动词 “are”，且 “stunning and shimmer” 两个动词需保持形式一致：若用进行式可用 “are stunning and shimmering”；此外主句应使用与时间状语相符的时态和完整谓语，原句 “I will always feel.” 不完整，需加情感补语，如 “moved” 或 “awed”。建议：注意从句中需要完整的谓语（包括 be 动词），并保持并列动词形式一致；主句要补足情感或状态的描述以构成完整句子。