Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn tự nhiên nhưng có vài lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Cụ thể: 'landscape' nên ở dạng số nhiều 'landscapes'; 'a lot of picture' nên là 'a lot of pictures'; 'reserve the memories' là diễn đạt không tự nhiên, nên dùng 'preserve memories' hoặc 'keep memories'. Ngoài ra câu trả lời có thể gọn hơn (tối đa 4-5 câu) và thêm 1 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại cảnh bạn thích chụp hoặc thiết bị bạn dùng). Hãy dùng liên từ đơn giản khi thêm chi tiết (for example, because).

예시: Yes, I love taking pictures of different landscapes. For example, I often photograph mountains and rice fields because their colors and textures are very photogenic. I usually use my smartphone and sometimes a small camera to capture them, so I can preserve these memories and share them with my family.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều tiếng lấp đầy ('um', 'uh'). Có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng: dùng 'rural area'/ 'urban area' cần số nhiều hoặc mạo từ ('rural areas' hoặc 'the rural area'); câu cuối không rõ nghĩa ('high rice bluff' sai từ). Nên trả lời trực tiếp, ngắt bỏ tiếng lấp đầy, giải thích cụ thể lí do (ví dụ: không khí trong lành, khung cảnh yên tĩnh) và dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để mạch lạc hơn.

예시: To be honest, I prefer views in rural areas rather than in cities because there are more trees and open spaces. Because the countryside is quieter and cleaner, I find it more relaxing to take photos there. For instance, I enjoy photographing rice terraces and small streams that you rarely see in urban areas.

제안: Câu trả lời lặp từ và thiếu cụ thể ('they are because' không hoàn chỉnh). Nên nói rõ lý do tại sao cảm thấy 'comfortable and familiar' bằng cách nêu ví dụ cụ thể (văn hóa, cảnh vật, mùi vị, con người). Dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ. Tránh lặp từ và giữ 2-3 câu súc tích.

예시: I prefer views in my own country, Vietnam, because I feel comfortable and familiar with the scenery and culture. For example, I love the sight of local markets and rice fields that remind me of home. Also, I enjoy meeting friendly people there, which makes sightseeing more enjoyable.

× Of course, I really enjoy taking pictures of various landscape.

✓ Of course, I really enjoy taking pictures of various landscapes.

Use plural form 'landscapes' because 'various' indicates more than one; countable noun needs plural. Suggestion: When using words like 'various', ensure the noun is plural (various + plural noun).

× When I see a pretty view, I want to take a lot of picture because I want to reserve the memories.

✓ When I see a pretty view, I want to take a lot of pictures because I want to preserve the memories.

'a lot of' requires a plural countable noun 'pictures'. Also 'reserve' is incorrect collocation; use 'preserve' or 'keep'. Suggestion: Use plural for countable nouns after 'a lot of' and choose correct verb ('preserve/keep') for memories.

× Umm, to be honest, I enjoy views in rural area more than urban area because you know, uh, there are many trees, umm in a rural area and uh is don't have many high rice bluff.

✓ Umm, to be honest, I enjoy views in rural areas more than urban areas because, you know, there are many trees in rural areas and they don't have many tall buildings.

Use plural 'rural areas' and 'urban areas' when speaking generally. 'Is don't' is ungrammatical; use 'they don't'. 'High rice bluff' is incorrect vocabulary; likely intended 'tall buildings'. Suggestion: Use plural forms for general statements and ensure subject pronoun matches plural ('they'). Choose correct vocabulary ('tall buildings').

× To be honest, I prefer views in my country to in other countries because they are because when I go sightseeing in Vietnam, I feel so comfortable and familiar.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in my country to those in other countries because when I go sightseeing in Vietnam, I feel so comfortable and familiar.

Compare 'views in my country' with 'those in other countries'—use 'those' as a substitute for 'views'. Original has repetition 'because they are because' and awkward structure. 'Familiar' should be 'at home' or 'it feels familiar', but 'comfortable and familiar' is acceptable when clarified. Suggestion: Use demonstrative pronoun 'those' to avoid repeating the noun and remove redundant words; consider saying 'I feel comfortable and at home' for clarity.