Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap daha doğal ve net olmalı. Önce doğrudan evet deyin, sonra nedenini kısa ve açık bir konu cümlesiyle verin. "sand story" ifadesi belirsiz ve yanlış; yerine "posting photos on Instagram" veya "sharing stories" gibi doğru terimler kullanın. Ek bilgi verirken bir bağlaç (because, so, and) kullanın fakat 5 cümleyi geçmemeye dikkat edin.

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views because I like posting them on Instagram. For example, I often take pictures of sunsets and cityscapes to share with my friends. This helps me remember places and get inspiration for my own photography.

제안: Cevap tekrarlı ve karışık; fikirleriniz net değil. Önce bir konu cümlesiyle tercihinizi belirtin, sonra 1-2 destekleyici neden verin ve gereksiz tekrarlar veya belirsiz kelimeler ("village", "luxury" yanlış bağlamda) kullanmayın. Bağlaçlarla (because, so, and) mantıklı bağlantı kurun. Ayrıca şehir ismi verirken nedenini açıklayın.

예시: I prefer urban areas because they offer more cultural attractions and convenient amenities. For instance, cities have museums, concerts, and diverse restaurants that I enjoy. Because of these choices, I find urban views more interesting than rural landscapes.

제안: Cevabınız belirsiz ve dilbilgisi sorunları var. Önce tercihinizi açıkça söyleyin, sonra nedenlerini spesifik örneklerle verin (kültür, yemek, müzik). Gereksiz dolgu sözcükleri (umm, I think it's all) kullanmaktan kaçının. Mantıklı bağlaçlarla fikirleri sıraya koyun ve cümleleri düzgün kurun.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I want to experience different cultures and cuisines. For example, seeing traditional festivals or trying local dishes helps me understand a place better. Therefore, I enjoy traveling abroad to capture unique landscapes and city scenes.

× Yes I do because as a teenager I love sand story in Instagram.

✓ Yes, I do because as a teenager I loved to post stories about the sand on Instagram.

The sentence has several issues: verb choice and tense, article/preposition use, and sentence clarity. Use a past or habitual tense appropriately; 'love sand story' is ungrammatical. 'Post stories about the sand on Instagram' is a clear, natural phrase. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'I loved to post' for habitual past or 'I love posting' for present habit, and include preposition 'on' with Instagram.

× I prefer urban areas because I think rural areas are village, I think and urban areas are more luxury. I loved luxury LA, I think I like it.

✓ I prefer urban areas because rural areas seem like villages, and urban areas are more luxurious. I loved luxurious Los Angeles; I think I like it.

Problems: incorrect noun usage ('are village' should be 'seem like villages'), wrong adjective form ('more luxury' should be 'more luxurious'), punctuation/run-on sentences. 'LA' expanded to 'Los Angeles' and 'luxury' changed to adjective 'luxurious'. Suggestions: use 'seem like' to compare, use comparative/adjective forms correctly, and split into clearer sentences.

× I prefer another countries we have because I didn't see other country culture or music foods, umm webs I think it's all.

✓ I prefer other countries because I haven't seen the cultures, music, or foods of those countries yet; um, I think that's all.

Issues: 'another countries we have' is ungrammatical—use 'other countries'. Tense: 'didn't see' should be present perfect 'haven't seen' to indicate experience. Plurals and articles: 'other country culture or music foods' should be 'the cultures, music, or foods of those countries'. 'Umm webs' is unclear; replaced with 'um, I think that's all.' Suggestion: use 'other countries' and present perfect for life experience, and list items with correct plural forms.