Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然、简洁并注意语法。开头可直接表明是否喜欢，然后用一到两个具体例子支持，并用连词使句子流畅。避免冗余短语（如 “in my recent time”）和断句错误。可以练习正确时态和名词形式（photograph → photography 或 photographs），以及具体说明你喜欢拍摄哪些“views”。

예시: Yes, I love taking photographs. I often use my camera to capture different views, especially landscapes and scenes around my school, because I like the light and atmosphere there.

제안: 要直接回答偏好并给出具体原因，注意语法和句子连贯性（例如动词形式和定语从句）。避免重复表达（“in my time”重复）。可以用连接词（because, so, whereas）来组织理由，并提供一两个具体的细节说明为什么更喜欢乡村景色。

예시: I prefer taking photos in rural areas because the countryside is quieter and has more natural scenery, such as winding country roads and fields, which help me relax and take my time to compose shots.

제안: 回答要更清晰表达偏好并给出具体原因，注意人称和词汇使用（例如 “I have her feels” 不正确）。避免重复并用连贯的逻辑表达（例如先说偏好然后解释原因并举例）。可以提到具体想拍摄的异国题材以增加细节。

예시: I prefer photographing views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new places and cultures. For example, I would love to shoot street scenes in a foreign city or coastal landscapes I haven't seen before, which give me fresh inspiration.

× Yes, I'm a photograph lover so I use my camera to take a lot of photographs.

✓ Yes, I'm a photography lover, so I use my camera to take a lot of photographs.

原句中使用了名词“photograph”作为职业/爱好描述不恰当，应使用抽象名词“photography”。此外在并列句中“so”前应加逗号以使句子更通顺。建议把“photograph lover”改为“photography lover”，并在书写时注意标点。

× In my recent time I really enjoying taking photos of different views such as. School View.

✓ Recently, I really enjoy taking photos of different views, such as school views.

1) “In my recent time”不自然，常用副词“recently”。 2) “really enjoying”结构错误；句子主语是“I”，谓语应为一般现在时“enjoy”以表示常态爱好；“enjoying”需要与“be”连用（例如“I am really enjoying”）。 3) “such as. School View.”中断句和大写不当，应连成短语“such as school views”。 建议使用“Recently, I really enjoy taking photos of different views, such as school views.”。

× I prefer take photos in villages because rather than the tall building of the urban cities, I prefer the rural roads so that I can take calm down and take photos in my time in my time.

✓ I prefer taking photos in villages because, rather than the tall buildings in urban areas, I prefer the rural roads so that I can relax and take photos at my leisure.

1) “prefer take”应使用动名词或不定式：常用结构为“prefer doing”或“prefer to do”，此处用“prefer taking”。 2) “the tall building of the urban cities”搭配不当，改为复数“tall buildings in urban areas”。 3) 重复“I prefer”可以保留一次；句子中“take calm down”是错误搭配，应使用“relax”表示放松。 4) “in my time in my time”重复且不地道，改为“at my leisure”。 建议把句子拆成更清晰的部分，使用动名词和正确的固定搭配。

× I have her feels in other countries because I like something new in my country.

✓ I feel more interested in other countries because I have seen things in my country many times.

1) “I have her feels” 是错误代词和搭配；应为“I feel”或“I am more interested”。 2) “because I like something new in my country”逻辑和表达不清，原意应该是对本国的事物已见多，想看新鲜事物，因此改为“because I have seen things in my country many times”。 建议使用明确的主语+动词短语，如“I feel more interested in other countries”。

× I have been seeing it for so many times. So if I can get to other countries to take photos, I prefer to go to there and I can see the new scenery I see and take different experience.

✓ I have seen it so many times, so if I can go to other countries to take photos, I would prefer to go there to see new scenery and gain different experiences.

1) “I have been seeing it for so many times”时态和用法不正确；应使用现在完成时“I have seen it so many times”。 2) “if I can get to other countries to take photos”用词笨拙，改为“If I can go to other countries to take photos”。 3) “I prefer to go to there”中“to there”冗余，不正确；应为“go there”。 4) “I can see the new scenery I see and take different experience”重复且名词单复数不当，改为“see new scenery and gain different experiences”。 建议使用条件句的合适时态（would prefer）和常用短语“gain experience/see new scenery”。