Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "different" used twice) and correct verb forms ("like taking" not "like to taking").

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because each angle can tell a different story. For example, photographing a building from ground level emphasizes its height, while a close-up of architectural details highlights texture and design.

제안: Give a direct preference and then support it with clear, specific reasons using linking words. Reduce filler words (uh, umm). Use correct grammar (e.g., "rural areas have natural scenery").

예시: I prefer rural views slightly more because they offer natural scenery and peaceful atmospheres. For instance, rolling hills and forests create calm photo backgrounds, whereas urban views are better for capturing busy city life and architecture.

제안: Answer directly and provide accurate, specific examples. Correct unclear or incorrect place names ("Candy" likely "Kandy"; avoid saying "traditional Pakistan" when speaking about Sri Lanka). Use linking words to connect ideas and limit repetition.

예시: I prefer views in my own country, Sri Lanka, because it has diverse natural landscapes. For example, Kandy offers scenic hills and historic temples, and places like Nuwara Eliya have waterfalls and tea plantations that are great for photography.

× Usually I like to taking the pictures in a different aspects because when we take one view of the image it will be giving a meaning but if you take a different different aspect it will give a different sides of meaning of that picture.

✓ Usually I like taking pictures from different aspects because when we take one view of an image it gives a meaning, but if you take different aspects it gives different meanings of that picture.

The phrase 'like to taking' mixes the infinitive 'to' with a gerund; use either 'like to take' or 'like taking'. 'The pictures in a different aspects' has article and plural errors; use 'taking pictures from different aspects' or 'different aspects'. 'It will be giving' is awkward future progressive; simple present 'gives' is appropriate for general statements. 'Different different' is a repetition error and 'a different sides' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'different aspects' and 'different meanings'. Suggestion: choose consistent verb form (gerund or infinitive) and match singular/plural nouns and articles, and use simple present for general truths.

× I prefer both, uh, because both have different umm, uh, feelings we can get or different perspective.

✓ I prefer both because each offers different feelings and perspectives we can experience.

The original repeats 'both' and uses 'different ... feelings we can get or different perspective' which is ungrammatical and awkward. Use 'each' to refer to the two options and pluralize 'perspectives'. Use 'offers' with singular 'each' or 'have' with 'both', and prefer 'experience' over 'get' for feelings. Suggestion: simplify the sentence and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun forms.

× We can uh, see urban area and the rural area, but rather than the urban area, rural area have the natural, umm, the perspective.

✓ We can see the urban area and the rural area, but compared to the urban area, the rural area has a more natural atmosphere.

Missing definite articles before nouns: use 'the urban area' and 'the rural area' when speaking about specific types. 'Rather than the urban area' is odd; use 'compared to'. 'Rural area have' has subject-verb agreement and article issues; use 'the rural area has'. 'The natural, the perspective' is ungrammatical; 'a more natural atmosphere' or 'a more natural feel' conveys meaning. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and ensure verb agrees with singular subject and use clear comparative phrasing.

× I prefer the views in Sri Lanka.

✓ I prefer views in Sri Lanka.

Using 'the views' is not wrong but unnecessary definite article can make the sentence sound awkward; 'views in Sri Lanka' is more natural when speaking generally. Keep present simple 'prefer' for habitual preference. Suggestion: omit 'the' when referring to views in general.

× Sri Lanka is the most natural place.

✓ Sri Lanka is a very natural place.

'The most natural' implies a superlative comparing Sri Lanka to all other places; if the speaker means it is very natural, use 'a very natural place'. Use superlative only when making a clear comparison. Suggestion: choose between 'very natural' or 'one of the most natural places' depending on intended meaning.

× We have hills, rivers, waterfalls and so many, so many traditional places.

✓ We have hills, rivers, waterfalls, and many traditional places.

Repetition 'so many, so many' is redundant. Use a single 'many' and include commas correctly in a list. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use concise list structure.

× Example in the candy we have the Gala and traditional Pakistan.

✓ For example, in Kandy we have the Galle and traditional places.

'Example in the candy' has multiple errors: 'candy' is a misspelling of the city 'Kandy'; 'Example' needs a preposition or introductory phrase like 'For example,'. 'the Gala' and 'traditional Pakistan' are unclear; likely intended 'Galle' (a city) and 'traditional places'. Use correct proper nouns and prepositions. Suggestion: use 'For example, in Kandy we have Galle and traditional places' or specify the exact attractions.

× That view is very, very nice looking, natural sensory we have.

✓ That view is very beautiful and naturally appealing.

'Nice looking' is informal and repetitive with 'very, very'; 'natural sensory we have' is ungrammatical. Use adjectives and adverbs correctly: 'beautiful' describes the view and 'naturally appealing' or 'has a natural charm' conveys sensory quality. Suggestion: use clear adjective phrases and avoid repetition; restructure to 'That view is very beautiful and has a natural charm.'