Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and clear but slightly wordy and a bit formal. Make it more natural by giving a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific examples and a linking phrase. Keep it within 3–4 short sentences and avoid unusual phrasing like “human figures.”

예시: Yes, I do — photography is one of my hobbies. I especially enjoy capturing landscapes and wildlife, for example early-morning mist in the hills and birds at a local lake. I also like candid shots of people because they tell a story.

제안: Good concise answer, but add a brief reason and an example to make it more informative and natural. Use a linking word to connect your preference with the reason.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because I find open landscapes and natural light more peaceful. For example, I enjoy photographing rice fields at sunset where the colors and reflections are beautiful.

제안: Your answer expresses preference and openness, but could be more natural and specific. Replace “wouldn't mind to explore” with a smoother phrase and add a brief reason or example to support both parts.

예시: I love the views in India — from the Himalayas to coastal beaches, there is huge variety. However, I’m also keen to explore other countries, such as Japan or Italy, to photograph different landscapes and cultures.

× Photography is my hobby. I like taking pictures of different views consisting of nature and human figures as well as animals.

✓ Photography is my hobby. I like taking pictures of different views that consist of natural scenery, people, and animals.

The phrase 'consisting of' is awkward here; use 'that consist of' to describe what the views include. Also 'nature and human figures' is unnatural: use 'natural scenery' and 'people'. This correction uses a relative clause to clearly modify 'views' and improves word choice and parallel structure.

× I love the views of our country India. However, I wouldn't mind to explore the views of other countries.

✓ I love the views of my country, India. However, I wouldn't mind exploring the views of other countries.

After modal expression 'wouldn't mind' the verb should be in the -ing form, not the infinitive with 'to'. Also 'our country India' is more natural as 'my country, India' in this speaking context. Change 'to explore' to 'exploring' to correct verb form and adjust the possessive for natural phrasing.