Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ: present simple), và giới hạn độ dài tối đa 3-4 câu. Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (for example, because, so) và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về thời gian hoặc mục đích (ví dụ: when I travel, to remember details). Sửa lỗi phổ biến: “a big friend to” → “I like” hoặc “I’m a big fan of”; “taking pictures to memory” → “take pictures to remember” hoặc “to keep memories”; “I often taking” → “I often take”.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I travel to natural landscapes, I often take photos to remember the scenery and details. I usually use my phone because it is convenient, and I later organize the best shots into albums.

제안: Câu trả lời hiện tại không rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp, và ý chính bị lẫn lộn. Trả lời trực tiếp (I prefer rural/urban areas) rồi giải thích lý do bằng 1-2 câu hỗ trợ với liên từ như because hoặc so. Tránh dùng cấu trúc mơ hồ (“big full atmosphere”) và thay bằng mô tả cụ thể (peaceful, fresh air, less noise). Sửa lỗi: “an open area”; “I prefer rural areas” hoặc “I prefer the countryside”; “It makes me feel…”.

예시: I prefer rural areas because they are peaceful and have fresher air. Since I live in an open area, I enjoy the quiet and cozy atmosphere, which helps me relax and think clearly.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng, có lỗi phát âm/ghi chép (các cụm như “Unicorn records” và “Hello Boys” không phù hợp) và thiếu chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp (I prefer views in my own country) và nêu 1-2 lí do cụ thể, kèm ví dụ thực tế (famous beaches, mountains, historical sites). Sử dụng danh từ đúng: “Vietnam has many landscapes” và tránh tiếng ồn như “uh”.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has a wide variety of landscapes. For example, there are beautiful beaches like Da Nang, dramatic mountains in Sapa, and many historical sites in Hue that are interesting to photograph.

× To be honest, I am a big friend to taking the photo.

✓ To be honest, I am a big fan of taking photos.

'big friend to' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'big fan of'. Use the noun 'fan' to express liking and the preposition 'of' after it. Also use the plural 'photos' for general activities. Suggestion: use common collocations (big fan of, fond of) and pluralize when speaking generally.

× When I visit the landscape, I often taking pictures to memory.

✓ When I visit landscapes, I often take pictures as memories.

'often taking' is incorrect because after an auxiliary or adverb of frequency we need the base verb form 'take'. 'Visit the landscape' is unnatural; use plural 'landscapes' or 'scenic places'. 'to memory' is incorrect; use 'as memories' or 'to remember'. Suggestion: use adverbs of frequency + base verb (I often take), plural for general statements, and correct prepositional phrase for purpose.

× Now I live in a open area so I feel open area if boring and I prefer to rural urban.

✓ Now I live in an open area, so I find open areas a bit boring and I prefer rural areas to urban ones.

Use the article 'an' before a vowel-starting noun: 'an open area'. 'I feel open area if boring' is ungrammatical; use 'I find open areas boring' or 'a bit boring'. 'I prefer to rural urban' has wrong word order and missing prepositions; use 'prefer rural areas to urban ones'. Also pluralize 'areas' for general comparison. Suggestion: use correct articles, 'find' to express opinion, and 'prefer X to Y' structure.

× It make me feel warm and cozy and give me a big full atmosphere.

✓ They make me feel warm and cozy and give me a very full atmosphere.

Pronoun 'It' is unclear; refer to plural 'rural areas' with 'they'. Verb agreement: use 'make' and 'give' to match plural subject. 'big full atmosphere' is unidiomatic; use 'very full atmosphere' or 'a strong feeling of warmth'. Suggestion: ensure pronoun matches noun number and choose natural adjective combinations.

× I am prefer view of my country.

✓ I prefer the views of my country.

Do not use 'am' with 'prefer' in simple present; 'prefer' is the main verb. Use plural 'views' for general statement and include the definite article 'the' before 'views of my country'. Suggestion: use simple present 'I prefer' and natural noun number/article.

× The Vietnam has many landscape, uh Unicorn records like Hello Boys or historical site.

✓ Vietnam has many landscapes, interesting records like 'Unicorn' and historical sites.

Do not use the definite article 'The' before country names like 'Vietnam'. Pluralize 'landscapes' and 'historical sites'. The phrase 'Unicorn records like Hello Boys' is unclear; I adjusted to 'interesting records like 'Unicorn'' but the student should specify correct names. Suggestion: omit 'the' with country names, pluralize countable nouns, and provide clear names for places or attractions.