Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, nhưng nên rút gọn tránh lặp từ và mở rộng bằng một chi tiết cụ thể hơn (ví dụ loại cảnh yêu thích hoặc mục đích chụp). Hãy dùng liên từ để nối ý mạch lạc và giữ tối đa 4-5 câu. Cố gắng dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn (ví dụ: 'capture' thay cho 'take', 'post' thay cho 'share').

예시: Yes, I love photographing different views. I mainly capture coastal landscapes and vibrant city streets with my friends, and I often edit the best shots before posting them on social media to document our trips.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ sai và lặp ý. Hạn chế lỗi như 'since because', số ít/điều hòa danh từ ('rural areas'), và từ sai ('skyed', 'feud'). Nên dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó nêu 1-2 lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'as' để nối ý. Chú ý phát triển chi tiết cụ thể thay vì mô tả chung chung.

예시: I prefer rural areas because they offer peaceful natural scenery and abundant greenery. For example, I enjoy photographing tree-lined paths and wildflower meadows, which help me relax and create more striking landscape photos.

제안: Ý chính rõ nhưng câu có lỗi thì thì và thiếu cụ thể; tránh dùng tính từ quá chung chung như 'absolutely captivating and brilliant' mà không cho ví dụ. Sửa ngữ pháp (use present tense 'are'), mở rộng bằng một lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể, và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý. Giữ 2-4 câu súc tích.

예시: I prefer views in my own country, Vietnam, because the scenery is incredibly diverse and familiar. For instance, I love photographing terraced rice fields in the north and colorful coastal sunsets in the central provinces.

× I usually capture landscapes and urban scenes with my friends.

✓ I usually capture landscapes and urban scenes with my friends.

No correction needed; noun forms are correct. Use plural 'landscapes' and 'urban scenes' to match general activities.

× In my opinion, I enjoy rural area since because there are a lot of trees, flowers and I can also capture beautiful and captivating landscapes of skyed and feud as well and it makes me really relax.

✓ In my opinion, I enjoy rural areas because there are a lot of trees and flowers, and I can also capture beautiful and captivating landscapes of the sky and fields; it really relaxes me.

The errors include singular/plural mismatch ('rural area' -> 'rural areas'), redundant conjunctions ('since because' -> 'because'), incorrect words ('skyed' -> 'the sky', 'feud' -> 'fields'), run-on sentence and incorrect verb form for effect ('it makes me really relax' -> 'it really relaxes me'). Suggestions: use plural for general preference, choose correct vocabulary, connect clauses with commas or semicolons, and use correct verb forms for feelings.

× Also, I often edit and share them on social media.

✓ Also, I often edit and share them on social media.

No correction needed; preposition 'on' with 'social media' is correct.

× I prefer views in my own country, Vietnam, because they were absolutely captivating and brilliant.

✓ I prefer views in my own country, Vietnam, because they are absolutely captivating and brilliant.

Using past tense 'were' is inconsistent with present preference 'I prefer'; change to present tense 'are'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent within the sentence.

× There are a wide range of views, a few.

✓ There is a wide range of views.

When using 'a wide range of', the verb should be singular 'is' because the expression is treated as a singular noun phrase. The fragment 'a few' is unclear and unnecessary; remove it or clarify (for example, 'a few of them are famous').