Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and long hesitations. Focus on natural phrasing and correct verb forms.

예시: No, I don't enjoy taking photos of views. I find it tiring because I have to carry equipment and wait for the right light, and I prefer just to relax and enjoy the scene instead of photographing it.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with linking words (for example, 'because' and 'also'). Use correct sentence order and avoid repeated words. Mention concrete differences between urban and rural views.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and less crowded. Also, I enjoy the natural scenery like fields and hills, which feel more relaxing than busy city streets.

제안: State your preference clearly and explain why with specific, coherent reasons. Use correct adjectives and verbs, and avoid unclear words like 'abandoned'. Use linking words ('because', 'so') and give an example or feeling to support your answer.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me see different landscapes and cultures. For example, visiting coastal towns abroad gave me fresh perspectives and exciting photo opportunities that I don't find at home.

× No, I don't like a picture.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures.

The student used the indefinite article 'a' with 'picture' incorrectly in this context. The question asks about a habitual activity (taking pictures of different views), so the noun should be plural or the gerund phrase should be used. Use 'taking pictures' to refer generally to the activity rather than 'a picture.' Use plural for general habits.

× Take a picture with the views because it's it's make me so tired and I don't like take a picture.

✓ Taking pictures of views makes me so tired, so I don't like doing it.

Multiple issues: the student used imperative form 'Take a picture' instead of the gerund 'Taking pictures' to describe a preference; 'it's it's make' mixes subject and verb incorrectly and duplicates 'it's'; 'make' should be conjugated to 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'Taking pictures of views'; 'I don't like take a picture' uses incorrect verb form—should be 'I don't like doing it' or 'I don't like taking pictures.' The corrected sentence uses proper gerund phrase, subject-verb agreement, and a clear pronoun reference.

× I prefer for in rural areas because it's nice and no no loud, no loud noises and the no not so many people.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are nice and not so noisy, and there are not so many people.

The student incorrectly used 'for in rural areas'—the correct phrase is simply 'prefer rural areas' or 'prefer living in rural areas.' Also 'no no loud, no loud noises' is ungrammatical; use 'not so noisy' or 'no loud noises.' The subject 'it' should refer to 'rural areas' (plural), so use 'they are.' Add 'there are' to comment on the number of people. Fixed prepositions and subject-number agreement.

× I prefer it's own other countries because I like to go another countries.

✓ I prefer other countries because I like to visit other countries.

'I prefer it's own other countries' is ungrammatical: 'it's' (it is) is incorrect and 'own other countries' is confusing. Use 'I prefer other countries.' Also 'go another countries' mixes singular/plural and wrong verb choice—use 'visit other countries.' Pronouns and noun number must agree and structure should be clear.

× It's make it make me abandoned and. Perfect.

✓ It makes me feel free and excited.

'It's make it make me abandoned' is ungrammatical: 'make' must be conjugated to 'makes' for the singular subject 'It'; 'make me abandoned' is incorrect word choice—'abandoned' has different meaning; likely intended to express a positive emotion such as 'free' or 'excited.' The fragment 'and. Perfect.' is incomplete. The corrected sentence uses proper subject-verb agreement and clearer vocabulary to express the intended feeling.