Views— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
수험생
I'm generally quite lazy and prefer staying at home to relax or play games, so I don't often go out to take photos. However, when I travel to new places somewhere I love enjoy taking photos of the scenery, especially the stunning landscapes and local architecture to remember to remember the trip.
시험관
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
수험생
Honestly, I prefer rural areas because the countryside often has more picturesque, well scenery and peaceful landscapes that are great to photograph. For example, I love visiting small villages where the whirlwind hills are quiet and the rivers make it easy to reduce memorable photos.
시험관
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
수험생
I'd say I prefer the views in my own country, Vietnam, because the scenery feels more familiar and reflects our culture. For example, places like Holland Bay and the terraced rice fields are incredibly scenic and unique.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
점수: 72.0제안: Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn hơn, tránh lặp từ và câu dài dư thừa. Bắt đầu trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể, dùng liên từ thích hợp và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (ví dụ “somewhere I love enjoy” và “to remember to remember”).
예시: I don't take photos very often because I usually stay home to relax, but I enjoy photographing scenery when I travel. For example, I like capturing stunning landscapes and local architecture to remember a trip.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
점수: 66.0제안: Cần dùng từ chính xác và sửa lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp (ví dụ “well scenery”, “whirlwind hills”, “make it easy to reduce memorable photos” không phù hợp). Trả lời nên rõ ràng với một câu chủ đề và 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể, dùng liên từ để liên kết ý.
예시: I prefer rural areas because the countryside offers peaceful, picturesque landscapes that are ideal for photography. For example, I enjoy visiting small villages with gentle hills and flowing rivers, which create memorable scenes to photograph.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
점수: 82.0제안: Trả lời tốt nhưng có thể cụ thể hơn bằng cách nêu vì sao những cảnh ở Việt Nam đặc sắc và tránh nhầm tên địa danh nếu không chắc (ví dụ ‘Holland Bay’ có thể gây nhầm lẫn). Giữ cấu trúc rõ ràng: câu chủ đề + 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ.
예시: I prefer views in my own country, Vietnam, because they feel familiar and showcase our culture. For example, the terraced rice fields in the north and coastal bays like Ha Long Bay offer unique, dramatic landscapes that I love photographing.
문법
× I'm generally quite lazy and prefer staying at home to relax or play games, so I don't often go out to take photos.
✓ I'm generally quite lazy and prefer to stay at home to relax or play games, so I don't often go out to take photos.
The verb pattern after 'prefer' can be either 'prefer to do' or 'prefer doing'. Using 'prefer staying' is possible but less natural here; 'prefer to stay' matches the intention of a habitual preference and keeps parallel structure with 'to relax'. Use consistent verb forms after 'prefer' for clarity.
× However, when I travel to new places somewhere I love enjoy taking photos of the scenery, especially the stunning landscapes and local architecture to remember to remember the trip.
✓ However, when I travel to new places, I really enjoy taking photos of the scenery, especially the stunning landscapes and local architecture to remember the trip.
The sentence has word order and redundant words ('somewhere', 'love', 'to remember to remember'). 'Love' plus 'enjoy' is redundant; choose one. Use 'I really enjoy' and remove 'somewhere' and duplicate 'to remember'. Also add a comma after the dependent clause for clarity.
× Honestly, I prefer rural areas because the countryside often has more picturesque, well scenery and peaceful landscapes that are great to photograph.
✓ Honestly, I prefer rural areas because the countryside often has more picturesque and peaceful scenery that is great for photographing.
The phrase 'well scenery' is incorrect; use 'picturesque and peaceful scenery'. 'Great to photograph' is acceptable but 'great for photographing' is more natural. Ensure adjectives modify nouns correctly.
× For example, I love visiting small villages where the whirlwind hills are quiet and the rivers make it easy to reduce memorable photos.
✓ For example, I love visiting small villages where the rolling hills are quiet and the rivers make it easy to take memorable photos.
'Whirlwind hills' is wrong word choice; 'rolling hills' is typical. 'Make it easy to reduce memorable photos' is ungrammatical and unclear. The intended meaning is 'make it easy to take memorable photos'. Fix verb and noun choices for clarity.
× I'd say I prefer the views in my own country, Vietnam, because the scenery feels more familiar and reflects our culture.
✓ I'd say I prefer the views in my own country, Vietnam, because the scenery feels more familiar and reflects our culture.
This sentence is overall correct in tense and agreement. No correction needed. Maintain present tense for habitual preference and present simple for general truths.
× For example, places like Holland Bay and the terraced rice fields are incredibly scenic and unique.
✓ For example, places like Halong Bay and the terraced rice fields are incredibly scenic and unique.
'Holland Bay' is likely a mistaken proper noun; the correct Vietnamese location is 'Halong Bay'. This is a vocabulary/place-name correction rather than a grammatical tense error. Spelling proper nouns correctly is important for accuracy.
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