Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời ngắn, không tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (ví dụ: Yes/No, và lý do ngắn), tránh lỗi như “don't really into”. Nếu muốn mở rộng, thêm 1–2 câu hỗ trợ với linking word (because, although). Giữ tối đa 5 câu và cụ thể hơn về lý do hoặc ví dụ.

예시: No, I'm not really into taking pictures because I prefer experiencing the moment rather than photographing it. For example, when I travel I usually focus on walking and enjoying the scenery rather than stopping to take photos.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng cần tự nhiên hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm lặp từ. Nên dùng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó bổ sung lý do cụ thể với liên từ (because, so, therefore). Tránh tiếng lấp đầy như “uh” và dùng danh từ số nhiều/cụ thể (rural areas, urban areas).

예시: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because the countryside is cleaner and quieter. For example, there is less air and noise pollution in rural villages, so the scenery looks much nicer and more peaceful.

제안: Câu trả lời hợp lý nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp (singular/plural, tense) và lặp từ. Nên nói câu chủ đề rõ ràng và dùng chi tiết cụ thể, ví dụ (locations, reasons). Sử dụng linking words (because, so, therefore) để mạch lạc. Giữ trong 2–3 câu và sửa lỗi như “have” -> “has” và “views that I haven't visited” -> “places I haven't visited yet”.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because there are many beautiful places I haven't explored yet. For instance, I want to visit national parks and coastal towns in my country before travelling abroad, so I can appreciate the local culture and scenery first.

× No, I don't really into taking pictures.

✓ No, I don't really like taking pictures.

The original sentence omits the verb 'like' after the auxiliary 'do'. In English, 'do' requires a main verb: 'do not like'. Use 'don't really like' to express a negative preference. Suggestion: include the main verb (like) and keep the gerund 'taking' for the activity.

× It is obvious for me that I prefer rural area to urban area because uh, urban area has so many pollution like air pollution or noise pollution.

✓ It is obvious to me that I prefer rural areas to urban areas because urban areas have so much pollution, like air pollution or noise pollution.

Errors: 'for me' commonly expressed as 'to me' and needs plural nouns 'rural areas'/'urban areas' when speaking generally. 'Has so many pollution' is incorrect: 'pollution' is an uncountable noun, so use 'so much pollution' and plural verb agreement 'urban areas have'. Suggestions: use 'to me', pluralize when generalizing, treat 'pollution' as uncountable and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× It ruined the view though.

✓ It ruins the view, though.

Tense and agreement: The speaker is making a general statement about urban pollution affecting views, so present simple 'ruins' is appropriate. 'Ruined' is past and implies a single past event. Keep 'though' at the end and use present tense for general truths.

× I prefer view in my own country because my own country have so many views that I haven't visited them at all.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because my country has so many sights that I haven't visited at all.

Use plural 'views' or better 'sights' when referring to many places. 'My own country have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'country' is singular and needs 'has'. Also 'them at all' is unnecessary when 'haven't visited' already refers to the sights. Suggestion: use 'views' or 'sights' and 'has'.

× So it would be great to visit all of them before I visit other countries view.

✓ So it would be great to visit all of them before I visit views in other countries.

Word order and noun form: 'other countries view' is ungrammatical—use 'views in other countries' or 'the views of other countries'. Also ensure plural 'views' to match 'all of them'. Suggestion: rephrase as 'visit views in other countries' or 'see the views of other countries'.