Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğal fakat biraz tekrarlayıcı ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Konuya doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle başla, gereksiz tekrarları çıkar ve cümle yapısını düzelt. Ayrıca kısa bir ayrıntı veya örnek ekleyerek cevabı zenginleştir. Örneğin: neden fotoğraf çekmeyi sevdiğini ve hangi tür manzaraların seni en çok memnun ettiğini belirt.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it relaxes me and helps me notice small details. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and old town streets because the colours and textures are very striking.

제안: Cümleler karışık ve bazı ifadeler anlamsız; bağlaç kullanımını ve kelime seçimini geliştir. Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesiyle tercih belirt, ardından bir veya iki özgül neden ve bir bağlaç kullanarak açıklama ekle. Gereksiz tekrarları çıkar.

예시: I prefer rural views because the landscapes feel fresher and more peaceful. For example, I like wide fields and forests, where I can hear birds and enjoy quiet walks, which I find more relaxing than busy city scenes.

제안: Cevap karışık ve belirsiz; dilbilgisi ve kelime hataları var (ör. "reviews" yerine "views"). Net bir pozisyon al ve koşul belirtirken daha düzgün bir yapı kullan. Bir koşul sun ve ardından bir örnekle bitir.

예시: It depends — I usually prefer views in my own country if they are beautiful and familiar, but I also like exploring landscapes abroad for variety. For example, I enjoy local mountain scenery at home, yet I would love to see the fjords in Norway for a different experience.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of various views because I am fond of them and when I take their pictures I feel myself very satisfied.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of various views because I am fond of them, and when I take pictures of them I feel very satisfied.

The sentence uses incorrect pronoun 'their' to refer to 'various views' which is acceptable but awkward; more natural is 'pictures of them'. 'Feel myself very satisfied' is incorrect English; the reflexive 'myself' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here. Suggest using 'I feel very satisfied.' Also add a comma before 'and' to join independent clauses.

× For my point of view, I love views in rural areas because it's in view, is very specific and is very fresh.

✓ From my point of view, I prefer views in rural areas because they are more distinctive and fresher.

The phrase 'For my point of view' is incorrect; use 'From my point of view' or 'In my opinion.' 'It's in view' is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Is very specific and is very fresh' uses singular verb forms with plural 'views' and awkward adjectives. Use plural subject agreement 'they are' and more natural adjectives like 'distinctive' and 'fresher.' Also consider replacing 'love' with 'prefer' to match the question.

× When you look at its view, you get very satisfied.

✓ When you look at the view, you feel very satisfied.

The original uses 'its view' which is unclear and mismatches noun reference. 'Get very satisfied' is non-native; use 'feel very satisfied.' Subject-verb agreement requires 'the view' (singular) with 'feel.' Also 'get' is less appropriate than 'feel' in this context.

× Of course, firstly, it depends on our country.

✓ Of course. Firstly, it depends on the country.

Using 'our country' is awkward when comparing own vs other countries; 'the country' is clearer. The original combines 'Of course' and 'firstly' awkwardly; separating into two sentences or using one is better. 'Firstly' suggests multiple points will follow; ensure structure supports that.

× If our country's view is very specific and very well, I can say that I can't prefer reviews in other countries, but it can actually depend on the countries.

✓ If the country's scenery is very attractive and beautiful, I would say I don't prefer views in other countries, but it actually depends on the country.

'Very specific and very well' misuses adjective/adverb; 'well' is an adverb, incorrect here. 'Specific' is odd for scenery—use 'attractive' or 'beautiful.' 'I can say that I can't prefer reviews' is confusing: 'prefer' should be used with direct object 'views,' not 'reviews.' Use conditional 'I would say I don't prefer views in other countries.' Also 'it can actually depend on the countries' should be 'depends on the country' for clarity and agreement.