Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm and gives an example, but it is disfluent, overly long, and unfinished. To improve: 1) Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question. 2) Keep the response within 3–4 concise sentences and avoid trailing off. 3) Use linking words (for example, last month…) to connect ideas and finish the example with a reason or result. 4) Add one specific sensory detail (colour, light, or mood) to make the example more vivid.

예시: Yes, I do enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, last month I photographed the Old Town’s narrow cobbled streets and historic stone buildings because the warm sunset light made the textures and colours stand out. I keep these photos to remember how each place felt and to share them with friends.

제안: This answer is direct and clear but very brief. To improve: 1) Add one or two supporting reasons to justify your preference. 2) Use a linking word to show contrast if relevant (for example, while rural areas are peaceful…). 3) Keep it concise — two to three sentences total and include a specific feature of urban views (architecture, lights, activity).

예시: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy photographing interesting architecture and the vibrant street scenes. For example, city lights and reflections on glass buildings often create dramatic photos that I find more exciting than quiet countryside views.

제안: Your answer is direct but too short. To improve: 1) Provide a brief reason for your preference and a specific example. 2) Use a linking word to expand (for example, when I travel…). 3) Mention what is different or special about foreign views (culture, architecture, colours). Keep it to two or three concise sentences.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I love discovering different architectural styles and cultural scenes when I travel. For example, when I visited Lisbon I enjoyed photographing the colourful tiled facades and winding alleys that you don't see at home.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because landscapes and cityscapes are often very picturesque and photos help me remember places for example, last month I took several photos of the Old Town with its narrow streets and the historic buildings because the.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because landscapes and cityscapes are often very picturesque, and photos help me remember places. For example, last month I took several photos of the Old Town with its narrow streets and historic buildings.

The original sentence runs on and contains a trailing conjunction 'because the' that makes it incomplete. This is a sentence structure error (run-on sentence and sentence fragment). To correct it, split into two sentences and remove the unfinished clause. Use a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses or separate them into sentences; begin the example with 'For example,' and eliminate the extra 'the' before 'historic buildings' which is unnecessary when using the plural with 'narrow streets.' Clear sentence boundaries improve coherence and grammatical completeness.

× I prefer taking views in urban areas.

✓ I prefer taking photos of urban views.

The phrase 'taking views' is awkward and ungrammatical; 'taking photos of urban views' or 'photographing urban views' is the correct expression. This is a sentence structure issue where the verb 'taking' needs a direct object ('photos') and the noun 'views' should be modified to indicate what is being taken. Replacing 'taking views' with 'taking photos of urban views' makes the meaning clear and grammatically correct.

× In other countries.

✓ I prefer views in other countries.

The original reply is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. As an answer to 'Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?' a complete sentence is 'I prefer views in other countries.' This fixes the sentence structure error by providing an explicit subject and verb, making the response grammatically complete and matching the question's tense and context.