Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be natural and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details. Avoid self-deprecating or unclear phrases like “I'm boring person.” Use linking words to make ideas flow (for example, "because" and "so"). Try to keep to 2–4 sentences and use more precise vocabulary such as "scenery," "landscapes" or "points of interest."

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love discovering new scenery. For example, when I travel I look for viewpoints, coastlines and city skylines to photograph, so I can capture a variety of moods and colours.

제안: Start with a clear direct answer (e.g. "I prefer rural areas"). Then give one or two specific reasons and a brief example. Replace vague or awkward phrases like "natural action" with clearer expressions such as "natural scenery" or "quiet surroundings." Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

예시: I prefer rural areas because the quiet countryside and natural scenery help me relax. For example, I enjoy photographing fields and forests where there is less noise and more interesting textures than in the city.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "I prefer views in other countries"). Give specific reasons and avoid filler sounds ("uh") and awkward phrasing like "I'm boring here." Instead say "I've already seen many places at home." Keep it concise and give a concrete example of what you enjoy abroad.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering unfamiliar landscapes and cultures. For instance, when I visit a new country I like photographing local architecture and street scenes that are different from what I see in Thailand.

× Of course, I like to take a picture of different views because I'm boring person.

✓ Of course, I like to take pictures of different views because I'm a boring person.

The student used the singular noun 'picture' where plural 'pictures' is natural when speaking generally (considered pluralization but main issue is article/adjective). More importantly, 'boring' describes something that causes boredom; to say the student experiences boredom they should use 'bored'. Also the sentence is missing the indefinite article before 'boring person'. Correct form: 'I am a bored person' or 'I find it boring' depending on intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'I'm a bored person' if you mean you feel bored, or 'I find it boring' if you mean the activity is boring.

× I would like to find a place to take a picture different view because I want to explore a new place, new photo, new things.

✓ I would like to find a place to take pictures of different views because I want to explore new places, take new photos, and see new things.

Use plural nouns for general activities ('places', 'photos', 'things') and include the preposition 'of' after 'take pictures'. Also use parallel structure with verbs: 'explore', 'take', 'see'. Suggestion: keep consistent plural forms and include necessary prepositions: 'take pictures of different views'. Use parallel verbs when listing.

× I prefer rural areas because they make me relax more than urban areas, and various areas also have natural action.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they help me relax more than urban areas, and many of these areas also have natural attractions.

The phrase 'make me relax' is awkward; use 'help me relax' (verb collocation). 'Various areas' is vague; 'many of these areas' clarifies reference. 'Natural action' is incorrect collocation; the likely intended phrase is 'natural attractions'. Suggestion: learn common verb collocations (help someone relax) and use appropriate nouns ('attractions' not 'action').

× I prefer in another country because I like to explore new things.

✓ I prefer to be in another country because I like to explore new things.

The student omitted the verb phrase that fits the structure 'prefer to be in' or should say 'I prefer another country'. 'Prefer in another country' is incorrect preposition usage. Suggestion: use 'prefer to be in' or 'prefer staying in' or simply 'I prefer another country'. Ensure verbs follow 'prefer' when comparing situations.

× I like to travel another country because, uh, in Thailand, uh, my own country, I always visit and I'm boring here, so.

✓ I like to travel to other countries because in Thailand, my own country, I always visit the same places and I get bored here.

After 'travel' the correct preposition is 'to' when indicating destination: 'travel to another country' or 'travel to other countries'. 'Always visit' needs an object ('the same places') to make sense. 'I'm boring here' is incorrect: the speaker feels bored, so use 'I get bored here'. Suggestion: use 'travel to other countries', specify what is always visited, and use 'get bored' or 'feel bored' to describe oneself.