Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatical, concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), use correct verb forms and articles, and limit to 2–4 sentences. Add one specific detail about what kinds of views you like and why to make the answer more vivid.

예시: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. When I travel, I usually photograph landscapes and city skylines because they help me remember the mood of the place. For example, I often take sunset photos with my friends to capture both the scenery and our memories.

제안: Improve accuracy and clarity: correct grammar (articles, singular/plural, word choice), remove contradictory or unclear phrases (e.g., “worst types of good views”), and use linking words (because, therefore, moreover) properly. Give one or two specific reasons and an example.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more natural. For instance, village landscapes often have fields, trees and clean air, which makes them peaceful and picturesque. Therefore I usually choose rural scenes when I take photos.

제안: Make sentences grammatically correct and concise. Use correct verb agreement and articles, avoid hesitation words, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one specific supporting detail and an example. Mention which specific type you prefer and why.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because it has a wide variety of landscapes, such as deserts, mountains and plains. Personally, I enjoy mountain scenery the most because the views are spectacular and the climate is pleasant; for example, I often hike in the mountains to take panoramic photos.

× Yes, definitely I'm like to taking pictures of different views because whenever, uh, I'm travel to any place, so I take very different pictures of the views and also with my friends because by taking picture and create a very, uh, a lot of memory with my friends and the and of the place.

✓ Yes, definitely I like taking pictures of different views because whenever I travel to any place, I take many different pictures of the views, often with my friends, because taking pictures creates a lot of memories of my friends and the place.

The original sentence uses incorrect verb forms: 'I'm like to taking' should be 'I like taking' (like + -ing). 'I'm travel' incorrectly uses 'be' with base verb; correct is 'I travel' (present simple). 'take very different pictures' is awkward; 'many different pictures' is more natural. 'by taking picture and create' mixes forms; 'taking pictures creates' uses noun and third-person singular verb. Also remove redundant words. Suggestion: use 'like' + verb-ing, use simple present for habitual actions, ensure subject-verb agreement with singular 'creates'.

× By my point of view, I usually prefer the views in the rural areas because rural area contain a very worst types of good views.

✓ From my point of view, I usually prefer views in rural areas because rural areas contain many great types of scenery.

Errors include incorrect preposition 'By my point of view' -> 'From my point of view'. 'the views in the rural areas' -> 'views in rural areas' (article unnecessary). 'rural area contain' has subject-verb disagreement and singular/plural mismatch; use 'rural areas contain' (plural) or 'a rural area contains' (singular). 'a very worst types of good views' is contradictory and ungrammatical; replace with 'many great types of scenery'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions, match singular/plural and verb agreement, and choose appropriate adjectives.

× Moreover, uh, in the villages the weather are so fresh and there are so many groups are grown, so that's why I usually prefer the views in rural areas.

✓ Moreover, in the villages the weather is very fresh and many crops are grown, so that's why I usually prefer views in rural areas.

'the weather are' is subject-verb disagreement; 'weather' is singular so use 'is'. 'so many groups are grown' is unclear and incorrect; likely meant 'many crops are grown' (passive with plural noun). Remove redundant 'are' and unnecessary articles: 'the views in rural areas' -> 'views in rural areas'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct nouns ('crops' instead of 'groups') and natural collocations.

× I usually like to prefer views in my own country because my country have very different types of area in it, like the deserts, mountain and the plain area.

✓ I usually prefer views in my own country because my country has many different types of areas, like deserts, mountains and plains.

'I usually like to prefer' is redundant and awkward; use 'I usually prefer' (prefer not followed by 'to' + base with 'like to prefer' incorrect). 'my country have' is subject-verb disagreement; use 'my country has'. 'very different types of area in it' should be 'many different types of areas'. Use plural forms for 'deserts, mountains and plains'. Suggestion: avoid redundant verb phrases, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct plural nouns.

× But I usually like to visit the mountain areas because, uh, the views of that area was very awesome and the weather was also so pleasant.

✓ But I usually like to visit mountain areas because the views there are wonderful and the weather is also very pleasant.

The original uses past tense 'was' ('the views of that area was') although the speaker describes a general preference and ongoing truth; present tense 'are' and 'is' are appropriate. 'like to visit the mountain areas' - remove unnecessary 'the' and 'to' after 'like' when using 'usually like to' can remain, but 'usually like to visit mountain areas' or 'usually prefer visiting'. 'very awesome' and 'so pleasant' are informal; 'wonderful' and 'very pleasant' are clearer. Suggestion: use present tense for habitual/general statements and correct subject-verb agreement ('views... are').